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the Hand of Fate |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Talk to me...... ----------------- Help me break the silence that is roaring through the tunnels of my soul.. ---------------------------------------------------- Set me free...... ----------------- Break these chains that bind me, knowing your sweet love will finally make me whole.. ---------------------------------------------------- For I have waited patiently and now the time has come.. The hand of fate brought you to me For me there's only one.. Throughout this life I've waited for a love I know is true.. And as I look into your eyes, I know that love is you...... ---------------------------------------------------- Walk with me...... ------------------ We'll walk into tomorrow with the sunlight chasing shadows all away.. ---------------------------------------------------- Lie with me.. ------------- Let me lie within your love and show you that it's meant to be this way.. ---------------------------------------------------- For deep within your heart you know you need not be afraid.. Time has led us to this point, our destiny was made.. The hand of fate brought me to you to love until the end.. Forever...never lonely... Lovers always...always friends ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, A little different style, but done with perfection, as you do with your touch. I'll never tire of reading your poems. And, I'm glad that I stopped by, once again. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... Yes, this one is different, but there is a melody soon to be born to fit it, and I think it will work! (I hope!) Thank you so much....... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, Sunny. I wish you the best........ |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. I WISH YOU WELL ON FUTURE POEMS. I'M SURE THEY WILL BE JUST AS GOOD AS THIS ONE. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi Sunny1 ... this piece shines, like your friendly face ... thanks for a soft tender poem ... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Balladeer...Thank you so much....I always appreciate your good thoughts! DYME....I thank you also...it means a lot... MA....I'm glad you enjoyed this one!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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