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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2000-07-29 12:37 PM



          “MEETING YOU”

I remember the first time we spoke on the phone,
So nervous was I, on that special day.
Finally hearing your soft gentle voice,
Knowing that it would happen, if it may.

We talked and chatted for hours,
About all that had blossomed with a daydream kiss.
We spoke of the love that had grown between us,
And we both desired one moment of bliss.

I know in my heart that one day we will meet,
You know it in yours too, you’ll see.
Because my angel that came down from above,
Came down again, and also touched thee.

I dreamt of the hours that we would spend together,
Perhaps a time soon in the future, it will be.
If I only could hold you once in my arms,
I’ll make you happy, just you wait and see.

And now, as I stare at the horizon,
I see the bright sun setting there,
Thinking of you while I’m gone overcomes me,
And down my face comes the trickle of a tear.

As I sit here and write you this poem,
And I look out over this tranquil sea.
My heart speaks about how much I love you,
Forever and a day, is the only way it can be.


Bill Charles

05/28/00 3:00 pm


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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-07-29 12:42 PM


How I relate to this...I too am awaiting that first meeting that first kiss...thanks for sharing this

never say never

Beth
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2 posted 2000-07-29 12:47 PM


~You have left me breathless, my dear friend. What can I say but Absolutely Brilliant!!!!~
Gossamerwings
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3 posted 2000-07-29 04:10 PM


Good poem about meeting on the internet.


Gossamerwings ;)

poutprincess
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4 posted 2000-07-29 04:15 PM


Loved this! Modern love,claiming new victims everyday...including me! She's a lucky woman!
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5 posted 2000-07-29 04:41 PM


Bill~
Most enjoyable.
~*Marge*~


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rosepetals25
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6 posted 2000-07-29 04:50 PM


Bill,
    
   I loveee this poem.  In about 1 month I'm going to meeting someone who I have grown to love over the past 7 months.  I'm sending this poem to him, knowing he will enjoy it as much as I did.    

                       rosepetals25
                

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2000-07-29 06:46 PM


Bill...
        This is beautiful...so tender, and
   loving.
         A poem meant for daydreamers!!



~~ To Live is to Give ~~


Tennessee Angel
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8 posted 2000-07-29 06:51 PM


I come home from work tired and mind-numb...and then I see a wonderful thing.  A poem from you that I have not yet read!  Just as I expected it is wonderful!  Passionate and romantic and a little bit of whimsy!  I loved it Bill!  You're making it hard to pick a favorite here.  

--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2000-07-29 08:23 PM


Hi Paula,
I'm glad that you could relate to this poem of mine. And I loved sharing it with you. Thank you for your very kind comments. Be careful.


Hi Beth,
Once again I thank you for coming by, and for your wonderful comments about this poem I have written. I humbly blush reading them.


Hi Gossamerwings
Just had to do this one, as so many are meeting this way.


Hello poutprincess,
Princess, you are so very kind, and yes, many victims to be claimed. A curse, or less, I do not know. Thank you for your comments.


Hi Marge,
Thanks for stopping for a read. I always welcome your comments.




Bill Charles
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10 posted 2000-07-29 08:26 PM


rosepetals25, thank you for the kind comments. I'm very touched that you would send one of my poems to someone that you care about. I graciously thank you.


Sunny1
Thank you Sunny. Your comments are always special to me. And yes, daydreamers are we.


Bill Charles
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11 posted 2000-07-29 08:30 PM


Tennessee Angel,
Angel, you are too kind and generous. I'm glad that perhaps I can cheer up your day with one of my poems that I have done. Romance is what I love. I do not think that I would want it any other way. Thank you for coming by, and for your comments.

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