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devina
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0 posted 2000-07-29 01:07 AM





Where-within empty walls- does such a love reside?
Shall I misplace a shadow box of Fate-
Only to see my Destiny shrivel past recognition?
What of Lust- impowerment in itself, inside?
Shall I compare my own trust, belated-
Base my fears and desire on purest intuition?

Gratification shall not triumph, in my world alone-
As scorn lies heavily upon my tongue,
While you and I breathe in perfect measure.
Beneath this world, I stand altar to the stone-
As life’s song has eternally been sung,
To need- to want, these have become my treasures.

Tears mark my only truth, suffice it to be loneliness…
Upon this dream, I falter to pray, oh blessed strength-
To end is only to begin yet in your arms, as it is worth…
Yearning brought on, by tender-sweet caress…
To melt unto you would be concrete-
Ginger designs mark a true path that is worn….



Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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Sven
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1 posted 2000-07-29 01:15 AM


I hope that your shoes are in good condition Devina. . . looks like you're going down that path again. . . but maybe this time, you'll find what you're looking for. . .

Wonderful my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-07-29 01:16 AM


"Beneath this world, I stand altar to the stone..."  Oh man...where have ya been my sista?  This is great, and you are developing quite an edge there---comes in handy for sacrifices...LOL...love ya much...write some time, will ya?
tracie66
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3 posted 2000-07-29 01:23 AM


Devina~
Fantastic writings girl   thanks for the wonderful read
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


lucky
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4 posted 2000-07-29 02:37 AM


could I remind you that I'm still reading your works..? I do pray everything is well with you. It could be that I just get to caught up in your words. love & prayers.

lucky (dale)


Marina
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5 posted 2000-07-29 11:25 AM


Just a little turbulance going on???   LOL

Good Luck.  You know where I am.  

Marina


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Marina Crossley


Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-07-29 05:13 PM


You've written some powerful stuff here devina! Take heart and have faith in yourself.  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-07-29 05:31 PM


Devina, my little friend~
This is powerful penning.
You excel.

'To melt unto you would be concrete-
Ginger designs mark a true path that is worn….'

Know that I love ya' !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Michael G
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8 posted 2000-07-29 05:38 PM


Very deep and powerful words here, to which I hope things go well......
devina
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Cali
9 posted 2000-07-29 09:17 PM


Sven- yes m'friend...these shoes have been made for walking...so I guess that's what I'll do!! and believe me when I say...you'll be the first to know!!

serenity- now you know that you and I were made for sacrifices- tis why we get along so well!! G* I've missed you sis!!

tracie66- thanks to you as always!!  

lucky- I know you're there...even if I don't hear from you...I always know my dear friend...all is well- as far as I know? he he

Marina- Turbulence wouldn't even begin to describe this feeling I've found...so zip those lips!! ROFL

Sharon- now those are some words to think on...thanks girl!!

Marge- Know that I love ya just as much dear...and thank you, my karma-inspiration!!!

Michael- so you're keeping your fingers crossed with me, I hope??   TY


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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