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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
When happiness is here I hold it very dear Heart as light as a feather Enjoying the sunny weather Warming my cool skin Feeling whole once again When lonliness comes calling Spring rain begins slowly falling Clouds fill up the sky I sit here wondering why Emptiness echoes through my being As our dreams begin fleeing When sadness makes me frown I can't help but feel down Life weighs on my shoulders Like huge granite boulders I must move them away To see the sun's rays When contentment enters in My face wears a soft grin I feel safe and sound Now that I have found A place where I can dwell Outside of my hidden shell When love comes knocking I hear the door unlocking The walls begin to shake Like in an earthquake Passion is set ablaze I'm left here in a daze Ecstacy follows close behind Totally blowing my mind Nothing will ever compare To the heights reached there Two souls tenderly unite In the middle of the night There are many more emotions Each has its own unique potion That causes them to break through Wherever Cupid's arrow flew So sit back and enjoy As new ones are deployed ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Sweet and wonderful! Great writing.  Gossamerwings ;) |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, this is wonderful, Lone Wolf! Emotions are such powerful, marvelous things and you have penned a powerful, marvelous poem to describe them. Great read!  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ Beautiful sweetie. emotions beginning to be set free and fly wonderfulLove Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Gossamerwings . . . Thank you very much. It was fun to write. Happy you enjoyed. Tennessee Angel . . . They are very powerful, almost overwhelming at times. Thanks! Tracie . . . Yes, they will be set free. Glad you liked this one my friend. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
your emotions are precious and so are you. Hey, I've been away, good to be back!!! Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jen...wonderful kiddo...you always touch me you know that. never say never |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Emotions woderfully expressed. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Yeah!!! well expressed is the key here... wonderful writing, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Amazing the emotions you covered and made us feel. "Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by rule."~ Samuel Butler ~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
IR . . . Thank you my friend. You are precious also!! Paula . . . Thanks, I know...but it is always nice to hear!! Eagle . . . Nice of you to read. Thanks. Sudhir . . . I try!! Thank you, my friend. Your words mean lot. Tess . . . There are so many I could never list them all, but thank you!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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DiscordantNote New Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 9Texas |
Well done, the rhyme flows well, also. "Things get complicated when you get past eighteen, and the further past eighteen you get... the more complicated they become". |
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