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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-07-28 12:10 PM



Open me up for you know the password,
Tell me your secrets and your concerns,
I shall note each word as it leaves your lips
Tell me your pain,
And I shall banish it forever,
Do not confided within the walls of mistrust,
Let me melt them brick by brick,
Believe in miracle because they do come true,
I know mine did,
When I met you,
Looking for love you have grown weary,
But don’t give up now for journey is at end,
Speak with your soul and listen with your heart,
As I stand here motionless heeding your every call



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-07-28 03:20 PM


Yes..lovely thoughts you have written..James
Toddles
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2 posted 2000-07-28 04:24 PM


Xeonox: Excellent!!!


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