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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 07-27-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redheart angrybraids

I am real,
for what real is worth.
I can feel
the heart beat of the earth.
I have strived
for life on my feet.
I have given birth,
layed my heart on fires hearth,
and stretched my time
on wings of mirth.
And now I'm gentle,
and now I'm round.


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 07-27-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
ma miller
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1 posted 07-27-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for ma miller   Email ma miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ma miller

this is the first of your work i have read and i like your style, RA (can i abreviate?) ...

I can feel
the heart beat of the earth.

cool line ...


My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 07-27-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

this is not beyond me---I feel the connection through words, redheart...  this is pure poetry.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 07-27-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LittleRedHeartAngryBraids~
This is so gentle
and so YOU !
What joy is mine !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 07-28-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Bumping per Ron's instructions.
Got lost in the Cere's hourglass of
miscalculated time.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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5 posted 07-28-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

perfect...once again ...
you say it so very well
with such wisdom and grace
take care gentle poet
jm


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Sunnyone
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6 posted 07-28-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

redheart angrybraids...

      I enjoyed the tenderness of this work.
             Very nice indeed....



~~ To Live is to Give ~~

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 07-28-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

The purest of pure tenderness.  Loved it.
redheart angrybraids
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8 posted 07-31-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

repeated mountains of gratitude, to all of your kind and gentle comments,

MA- thank you for checking it out.

serenity-as always it is a pleasure, thank you kindly.

Marge-the flattery you bring, your words make me smile, thank you.

jm-thank you so.

sunny1-thank you, glad you liked.

Mark-thank you.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids
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This is the icing on the poetic cake...
I love it much!!!
DiscordantNote
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10 posted 08-01-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for DiscordantNote   Email DiscordantNote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DiscordantNote

Lovely. There is a simplicity and gentleness barely beneath the surface. Yes, round is a good analogy.

"Things get complicated when you get past eighteen, and the further past eighteen you get... the more complicated they become".
redheart angrybraids
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11 posted 08-10-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

thank yo again serentiy
and thank you as well DisNote.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids
JamesMichael
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12 posted 08-13-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You have written a very tender morsel...James
passing shadows
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you are missed
 
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