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My Feelings For You
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My Feelings For You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MY FEELINGS FOR YOU” I ran down to that lonely river, And walked up the humble stream. Looking for you years ago my sweet, Was I lost somewhere in a dream? I searched throughout the great desert, And I looked into that vast forest too. Someday I’ll find you for real, And explain my tender heart to you. In my dreams I have tasted all of your passions, And it has filled me all the way through. Is that your heart I hear singing my lady, Does it sing only for me too? And then I held your gentle hand, I felt it so warm and filled with ecstasy. All the feelings that you carry inside, Is there something there for me? Our lips touched and we were on fire, Out of the reaches of the deep. I know you’re saying something to me my love, Will you be there, or will you make me weep? Emotions that overwhelm us, Comes from a place within. At times we know not of them, Does that then make it a sin? When I hold you in my embrace, And stare at those beautiful eyes. I sense that you have feelings for me, Is it just for today, or as forever goes bye? My fingers touch your sweetness, And my lips touch your tender breasts. The feelings that I have for you, May forever, never rest. Out of the blue you came my love, And into my heart you became everything. You mention I have also entered yours, And only for that, I’ll give you anything. Bill Charles |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill All I can say is WOW - you write with such tenderness and emotions, at the same time telling a sweet story. "Emotions that overwhelm us, Comes from a place within. At times we know not of them, Does that then make it a sin?" Very powerful statement. Really enjoyed your poem. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh, how lovely! What woman wouldn't want something like this written of her? Once again, Bill...Wonderful!  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
In my dreams I have tasted all of your passions, And it has filled me all the way through. Is that your heart I hear singing my lady, Does it sing only for me too? always..beautiful words...Bill ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your adoration of this special woman certainly makes for lovely verse, Bill. ~ Claire< !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Beautiful writing Bill. She must be a very special lady to stir these feelings in you. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Once again I love your work! I always look forward to reading your poems. They are always filled with such romance and heartfelt tenderness. rosepetals25 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree with claire and Eloise Only a special love would inspire such emotions. It's nice to have a muse like that. Very tender and romantic Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One lucky woman she is to have you and one lucky man to be able to love as you do. Great read my frriend. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello ddgoose, Thank you once again for your kind comments. And I'm glad that you enjoyed one of my poems. Tennessee Angel Thank you very much Angel, for your precious comments to this poem of mine. Glad that you enjoyed it. Stop by again. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Out of the blue you came my love, And into my heart you became everything. You mention I have also entered yours, And only for that, I’ll give you anything. .... Such tender affectionate thoughts... Bill Charles you are gifted brilliant skills in romantic writing... Muchly enjoyed... Thanks regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi MMoonchild, Thank you so much Maureen, for the kind comments from you on this day. Hi Meadowmuse, I appreciate your kind comments about the feelings of this poem. But perhaps the special woman is only a figment, wanting to be real. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bill, such a tender and romantic read. It left me sighing. Have a great day, Juls |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Eloise. Thanks so much for stopping by, and for your very kind comments. Hi rosepetals25, You have once again replied to one of my poems with such kindness, and I thank you. I love to write about romance, as I am hopeless in that regard. Hi Elizabeth, Yes, I have to agree with you all also, but the special one, is she here or there? Thanks again for your kindness. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Mark, I thank you my friend, for stopping by and for your touching comments. Yes indeed, the touch of that special woman! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir Iyer, Sudhir, I am blushing red with your kind and thoughtful comments. And thank you, thank you ever so much, for the comment about romantic writing. It has truly touched me. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
juliet_2u, How did I ever miss your comments, I must have gone right over them. I do apologize to you Juliet_2u. You also have a great day, no better than that, a stupendous day for you! |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very heartfelt verses here Bill, keep up the good work! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Toddles, Thanks so much for stopping by, your comments certainly are appreciated. |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Nice romantic writing.I bet your wife is happy with those last 4 lines!  ~~Out of the blue you came my love, And into my heart you became everything. You mention I have also entered yours, And only for that, I’ll give you anything.~~ Gossamerwings ;) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bill~ What a romantic piece of poetry...beautiful indeed. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Bill, Once again you have stirred emotions within me. This woman must be a very special lady for you to carry so much dignifying love. This is truly a wonderfull poem. Thanks for sharing. You got my applause~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're another hopeless romantic, I see... We always have room for guys like you - Nice writing, Bill... I like it, I like it...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hello Gossamerwings, Your comments are indeed welcome, and I thank you for them. The last four lines were very special, I didn't really know how much, until after I wrote them, and then read what I had written. tracie66 Thank you for your comments to this poem that I have put together and is very special to me. Thanks for coming by. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Beth, I feel honored that I could write something this humble, and have it stir emotions within someone. It is very gratifying to me. And thanks for your stirring comments, as they only inspire me to continue. Oh Nan, a hopeless romantic I am, totally hopeless, but loving it just the same. Thanks for liking this writing that I have done. And, thanks for coming by. |
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