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A View To A Spill" ( in ballad form)
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A View To A Spill" ( in ballad form) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
If I may have your attention for just a moment please I'd like to put my two cents in to see just who agrees At times with all our new found friends things could be mis-construed But in the end that would depend what thoughts you use for food This place for some may have become too swift for rising star As pieces penned will soon descend way down below the "bar" With very few exceptions to this rule could this be fate ? Though many here would call me fool here's what I postulate It seems to me those names you see on top are often there Not just for their ability to write with style and flair They've earned a spot that most have not for they're a special breed That makes the time to comment on the poetry they read Alas I cannot count myself among those of their ilk As one who's dropped the glass I must suppose I've spilled the milk ! [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc--Loved this poem!...watch out your humor is showing...and your poetic ability  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, Oops, and I try so darned hard to keep it covered up ! Wouldn't want to scare any potential readers away you know .Thanks for pointing it out , I'll try to keep it under wraps ... Doc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love it! Delightful, Dr. Moose! Hey, you're pretty good at these ballad thingies too! Well done, again! Denise |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
d, Tried to throw a little of everything into this one , just to see how the mix would come out .Glad you approve. Doc |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ Oh, my goodness ! I LOVE IT ! Ya' know what they say ... No use crying over spilled 'ilk' !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge , My thoughts eggzackly . Now with just a few more ingredients we outta be cooking up somthin' real fine ! Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let's see.... *ilk...eggzz... If we pick them up off the flour and mix 'em up... we can have some flapjacks....!!! |
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