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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-07-27 06:40 PM

So near

Let me hold you close
all thru the night.

Let your curves caress me
with all their might.

Let your tender lips
whisper in my ear
lovely words
I long to hear.

"James, my dear...
how could I possibly live
without you so near."

Jameslee@July27,2000

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2000-07-27 06:47 PM

James,
Your poetry has become very romantic. This was short but kind of said it all
Liz

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2000-07-27 07:04 PM

jmlee12345,
Short, but very revealing. I just like reading your poems. Keep writing my friend.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-07-27 07:09 PM

I LOVE this one James!!!!!!

Absolutely wonderful my friend. Says so much, in so few woeds. I know you will hear these words......

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2000-07-27 07:12 PM

James, bravo, bravo, bravo! Love this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-07-28 03:26 PM

Thank you Liz, Bill, Marina, and Marsha for your nice replies. James

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-07-28 04:23 PM

this is a wonderful poem. i enjoyed reading it very much.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-07-30 08:58 AM

So sweetly romantic James! I hope you get to hear these words ... lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-08-08 10:59 PM

Thank you ERIN and Kit for the nice responses...James

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