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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Once I was an artist I paint no more Once I was a musician I play no more Once I was an athlete I run no more Once I was a photographer I click no more Once I was a writer I write no more Once I was A Lover Time flies Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once I was forlorn and lonely...now I am not......time flies.. take care ...ethome.. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Arresting words, Local Rebel. Your work has such a somber yet audible edge. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i think you will always be all of those things........ time flies, but so does a hawke and a the talon's of a hawke are always ready to grasp onto life....  your few short lines say so much about the things which mean so much to you |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are still all those things. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rebel--These few words are so heavy...You must be a lover and a poet. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey can I ditto all of the above?  no really, gosh, I know just how you feel in this one...makes me blink hard and realize just how much time does fly...whew... but you forgot one thing: once you were a best friend and you still are |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But you haven't lost those abilities... only taken a break from the activities. *S* 'Cept you damn sure haven't stopped writing! (Unless you're stealing from another poet's notebooks? LOL) [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rebel, as long as time doesn't take our hopes along with it, we're still in the game.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Many things change...if we allow it, powerful writing, it caused me to reflect for a moment....I love it when poetry does that! Great work~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rebel~ Quite a reflective little piece. Worth the ponder that it caused ... I enjoy pondering. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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