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I'll Be There........
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I'll Be There........ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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If you need a helping hand.. or solid ground on which to stand.. If you only need a smile.. or just to talk a little while.. If you've had a real bad day.. things aren't working out your way.. The only thing that I can say is I'll be there.... If you're hurting deep inside.. nothing works, you know, you've tried, If everyday your poor heart breaks.. and you're tired of how it aches.. If it's love that can't be found.. and you're feeling really down.. You just need to turn around.. I'll be there.... I'll be there to stand by you.. I'll be there to help you through.. It's no matter what you do.. I'll still be there.... I'll be with you, right or wrong.. I've been with you all along.. When you're weak, I will be strong.. I'll be there.... If it takes a lifetime long, I'll still be there.... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Sunny1, these are the words that every person longs to hear. To know that there is a place in this world to turn to. One person on whom you may count for ever; our rock. That we all could find someone to be there! Simply beautiful! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
I really like this. Good job. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is a great poem, good grief girl how do you do it. This is one of those poems that will always strike a chord with someone, and today that someone is definately me! Love it  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, This is really special. You do have a way. Oh, I'll be there. |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Very positive 'song' here. I really like it! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Very well written, I love the cadence of it all.......... the meaning of it is so dear.. |
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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
beautiful I had to look around I could almost feel you standing beside me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
How very sweet and loving. If we can do nothing else....just being there is comfort beyond words...and sometimes it's the most important thing of all. Great work~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Trew....Just to have a friend around when we need them is worth everything....I agree! angel girl....Thank you and I'm glad you liked it..... Marsha....If this little poem helped you today, then I am pleased!!! Bill......I will be there.... I thank all of you so much for reading, and your replies! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Gossamerwings.....Ah, yes, it will end up as a song, no doubt! Michael......I've got the melody drifting through my head, but the words came first... Zion....Maybe I was there..you never know!! Butterflies...I agree, and sometimes just knowing there's a friend can be enough to lift us up!! Thank you all for giving me input on this.....I learn from you, and each of you says is so important to me........ ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
To Gossamerwings.....Ah, yes, it will end up as a song, no doubt! Michael......I've got the melody drifting through my head, but the words came first... Zion....Maybe I was there..you never know!! Butterflies...I agree, and sometimes just knowing there's a friend can be enough to lift us up!! Thank you all for giving me input on this.....I learn from you, and what each of you says is so important to me........ ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Now I can tell you that I was definitely singing this one !  So enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
One word. Inspiring. I pray that everyone will add a little of this verse to their own life. Richie! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge, Thank you for your kind words here. I needed them, especially today. I hope you always have a song to sing! Richie, We could all use some inspiration now and then. I thank you for reading this.....I appreciate it. ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sunny1, you have to quit showing our age like this...{humming humming}... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine....Age is only in your mind!! HA!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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