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If I were a plant
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If I were a plant |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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If I were a plant Thoughts talk endlessly Walking in the rain. Which drops will wet me And which drop falls vain? Torrents are flowing Through chasms that turn From some I will glean For some I will yearn. I'm wet to the bone No shelter no door I walk in the rain And feel it no more. If I were a plant With roots in the ground Would be no question Which drop would be sound. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Seymour.... I learn so much from your writings!! You can take any subject and make it flow smoothly........... This is great, (especially to a gardener such as myself!!) Thank you for this one..... ~~To live...is to give~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
If you were a plant you could'nt write this good.....might as well keep singing in the rain......I enjoyed the read very much.. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I walk in the rain And feel it no more." Seymour, love the way you express yourself. This is grand writing. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
simply exquisitely penned..... enjoyed very much, Sy! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
can you stand some more applause...I do so admire your style, seymour! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Great writing...such a view...I'd hate to be one of MY plants though....poor little things, maybe they die from boredom as I pour my heart out to them....lol  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You just keep pouring these little gems of wisdom an beauty out ! What a talent you share with us all. Thank you, dear man. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Looks like everyone agrees with me about your poetry. Superb writing, my friend Please keep writing Love ya Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So this is what it's come down to, sy...if I were a plant?  hehe. Well, few people could carry it off as well as you. Good, my man... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, You would be surprised what a plant can say, thanks. Claire, Thank you for the grand. *L* Doreen, Your comment is a delight. Serenity, You are a gem. Butterfly, Delightful comment. Marge, You are a treasure and a pleasure. *L* Elizabeth, Love ya Sy Balladeer, Your good rains on my plant. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know what's wrong with this picture? I just can't see a man like you standing out in a rain like that...LOL...{~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well I have my senior moments. *L* |
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