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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-07-27 02:15 AM


I arose early to greet the morning sun,
Yet it was your warmth that made the day new.
I inhaled the fragrance of a flower,
And all I could smell was you.
I listened to a gentle shower,
But your words filled the rain.
I watched the swaying of the trees,
They softly spoke your name.
I strolled along the silky beach,
Watching the mighty crashing waves,
But it was thoughts of your tenderness,
That took my breath away.
As the moon began to say good evening,
And appeared so huge and bright,
I smiled as I continued walking,
For it was images of you that lit my path.
And now as I lay upon my pillow,
And slowly close my eyes,
It will only be dreams of you,
That craddle me through the night.



[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 07-27-2000).]

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Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2000-07-27 02:18 AM


Juls this is so very sweet.

never say never

juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-07-27 02:24 AM


Paula thank you so much, you're always so kind. Thanks again, Juls
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-07-27 08:53 AM


Hey Juls---are we in love or something. This is so tender..a lucky man he is.  May this joy never leave your heart.
juliet_2u
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4 posted 2000-07-27 09:20 AM


Mark, I'm sorry to say but a love long past, but still in my heart. And they say time heals all wounds, over 20 years now and still waiting. Thanks for your kind words, Juls
BSC
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5 posted 2000-07-27 07:43 PM


Another beauty Juls, simply lovely.  Bonnie
Richard McDonald
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6 posted 2000-07-27 07:49 PM


20 years and still have the kind of love that takes your breath away. Must have been something incredibly special. Lovely poem.
Richie!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2000-07-27 07:59 PM


juliet_2u,
What a lovely poem that you have written. I must read more of them. Thanks for sharing.


juliet_2u
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8 posted 2000-07-27 08:47 PM


Bonnie, again thank you so much. As you know I love your labors of love also. Take care, Juls
juliet_2u
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9 posted 2000-07-27 08:50 PM


Richie, it was and probably always will be a very special love to me. Thanks for your kind words. Take care, Juls
juliet_2u
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10 posted 2000-07-27 08:52 PM


Bill, I'm humbled by your words. Thank you for your kindness. Take care, Juls
Janet Marie
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11 posted 2000-07-27 09:57 PM


this kind of poem can only be inspired by someone
who left traces of love in our heart and soul
beautiful poem
imagery and emotions are perfect
very nice work ...
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
12 posted 2000-07-27 10:01 PM


Juls*
This is magnificent!!!  When they fill every moment and every thought...no matter the beauty to the eye the senses are still filled with them.....Wonderful writing~

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-07-27 10:39 AM


Consumed...exactly...James
juliet_2u
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14 posted 2000-07-28 08:49 AM


Janet, you couldn't be more correct about those traces. Thanks for all your kindness. Have a great day, Juls
juliet_2u
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North Carolina
15 posted 2000-07-28 08:54 AM


Butterflies, you are so kind. Strange when they have a way of doing that isn't it. Have a great day, Juls
juliet_2u
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16 posted 2000-07-28 08:56 AM


James, completely and totally. Take care, Juls
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