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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Iron Rain never ending. Blue memories, Gray sky. Pain is not forever. For tomorrow, I may die. Or not. Only fading, Ashes to dust. Darkness Overtaking, Iron to rust. Strengths ebb. Visions fail. Who am I ? To assail, the Night John D LeClare |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
First Welcome John D this made me want to reply in haiku... Morn is rising gray Reigning dampness all around Cleansing today's pain. Tomorrow shall clear The mind will open to light Myst will fog no more. The yesterday's gone Today's shall strengthen and cling Removing all doubt. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Welcome to Passions!! Great entrance~ packing alot of feeling into so few lines......something I don't have a knack for so I'm always in awe of those that can! I'll look forward to more of your work in the future! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions I know you will enjoy your stay. Great poem to start with, well done! take care.........ethome.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi John... Ahh....I see that you have been welcomed, so I will 'ditto' all of the above. I liked this read....few words, but powerful!! Hope to see more.......< !signature--> Love received is equal to love given! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!  |
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