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Just One Moment
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Just One Moment |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
For just a moment, she touched the sky. There in that moment, lost in his eyes. In just a moment, she felt such bliss. For just one moment, heaven in his kiss. And in that moment, her heart took wing. It was that moment, she felt everything. And with that moment, she could finally see. That precious moment, she found eternity. never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
If only those moments would last a lifetime...such a tenderly soft weave Paula, I was swept up in the sweetness~ |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very pretty and sweet... Almost like you were weaving a dream that one can remember forever.. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ And 'Just One Moment' was all she needed !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Said with such tenderness and emotion! Bravo!!! |
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niceguy6459 New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 4 |
In any moment anybody can fall in love and that is allit takes. You captured it vary well. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Lovely, sweet and true! Beautifully worded and flowed nicely. Linda M. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula, Very nice and well done. I'm glad that I stopped by. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
aaaahhh.....sweet moments in time and our memories and poems are our photo albums of life. Great tender write. |
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Zion Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 33Melbourne Australia |
so much tenderness one word WOW |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bdc...I wish they could too Cuddlez...thank you...yes a pretty dream Marge...if only that were so Toddles...thank you Todd Niceguy...yes that magic moment when you first know Linda...thank you for the read and the sweet comments Bill...its always a pleasure to have you visit...thank you Mark...thanks when the feeling is there its easy to write about never say never |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Zion...you sneaked in there on me thank you for your sweet words you know they mean a lot to me never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those kisses can do that.....great flow to this Paula ...well written.. you captured the situation very well.....ethome.. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thank you ethome...some kisses are just better than others lol never say never |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Paula, This was so soft and tender. **sigh** Wonderful writing here. I like this style. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Yep..I agree..Just takes that One Moment. This was lovely -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jen...you always have such kind and encouraging words thanks kitkat...sometimes a moment is all we have thanks never say never |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, Very sweet poem. We should all have more moments like the one you have captured so well rosepetals25 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rosepetals...this got lost in the shuffle and I never got the chance to say thank you |
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