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Let Me Be........ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Call to me when you are afraid And have no where left to go Call to me when you are alone And there is no one that you know I’m here to hold you tight And whisper in your ear I’m here to give you strength To face your every fear I’ll give a soothing touch Upon your brow so soft I’ll give you gentleness Setting your heart aloft I’m here if you look Just beyond your heart I’m here if you need me Never shall we part As you were for me When I needed you the most I will do the same for you Allow my love to be your host |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
How sweet and caring. A tender poem here, Butterflies! Well done!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a tender sentiment you have expressed...lovely . never say never |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Are you calling me some sort of parasite???  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
G.W.* Thank you so much for reading~ Paula* Your comment means alot Paula as I've enjoyed reading your poetry...thank you~ Christopher*.....something you're feeling guilty about  ???[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Allow my love to be your host" What a splendid line. I enjoyed reading this tender missive. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Flows well & is very gentle and heartfelt! Thanks for the Soul-Shine!!! |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
how nice. Just a very easy to read and heartwarming piece. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Butterfly, Just like your name, this piece alights softly on the hearts of the readers. Linda M. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your heart is so loving still after all the pain and anguish you have endured. This was so tender and caring how could one not call you for help. The butterfly has spread her wings of loving heart once again.  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Clair* I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, thank you~ Todd* "Soul-Shine"......what an awesome thought...thank you~ Effigy* I decided to post something more upbeat than my "usual"..thank you for your comments~ Linda* What a beautiful comment, thank you~ Mark* "Golden Rules"...someone has to follow them once in a while  Thank you from the bottom of my heart, your comments are always sunshine~ |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Holly~ This is so beautiful -- I have heard these words echo around in my head so many times myself. You are very special, indeed, and I this is a very special poem to me. You have me smiling rainbows now, too! Got any extra room left up there on that cloud for a friend? Love Ya~~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Terry* Always room for friends...lol Thank you so much for your kindness~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Butterflies, I really love the gentle sweetness in this piece. It flows with such tenderness of love. Just watch out for those parasites though, you could get an itch...  Of course you might like that itch.... Parker |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Butterflies, "Allow my love to be your host" h'mmm, sounds good to me. I'll be reading your next poem. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Parker* Thank you for your ever sweet replies....the cowboy way I suppose Bill* Thank you much for your kind reply. (Only Christopher could somehow turn this poem into something about parasites......EWWWWW! ) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fabulous is one word amongst many that comes to this reader's mind and I think I will stick to it.... butterflies~ this is fabulous... so be it... regards, sudhir |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I'm speechless, I realy do not know what to say, it was great and so often have I asked the same question . I love this poem, it has every thing I would expect from a poet of your talent . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle* One word and I'm smiling...thank you~ Sudhir* I'm glad that one came to mind...I'm touched, thank you~ Tom* Thank you from the bottom of my heart...It's an honor~ |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
This poem is as soft as a wisper and as strong as forever is long John D |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, I am sitting here admiring the strength of a single butterfly. It is an awesome sight to behold my friend. This was beautiful!! I have to say, I loved it. Every word. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
this is so sweet...how great to be able to feel this way...Tony |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
John* what a beautiful compliment...wow! Thank you~ LW* Thank you my dear friend! I'm always so glad to hear from you! Tony* Thank you for reading and your very kind coments~ |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Like the wings of a dove flowing in the wind. What a sensitive piece of work. I really enjoyed this one. Thanx |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Full of magical flow is this tender loving piece Butterflies.....Great read...write on! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I had to come back to this one. I think you know by now how much I love your works. Or do I need to say it louder.LOL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ You softly flutter to my heart. I'm so proud of you. This is a lovely, lovely piece and you are a lovely, lovely soul. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my my my... me thinks me has just been kissed by a butterfly lovely and sweet me SS... very nice indeed... keep this up and your gonna get that halo to go with those wings later-host-gator ss |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
spoken from the heart. Lovely. Especially like the last line. Coirnne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh2beme* cool name..Welcome to Passions! Thank you for reading and your beautiful reply~ ETHome* Wow..thank you and I will....no choice Mark*...Pardon Me? thank you for your sweetness...always a smile from you!Marge* Awwe you make me blush with such sweetness, it's an honor to make you proud...I swear from the bottom of my heart. Thank you so very much~ J.M.* Kissed...yep but I won't say where Thank you my sweet sis! A halo??? Wow...that would be wayyyyy cool...course I'd have it bent in a day Corinne* Thank you so much...I'm glad you liked it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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