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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-07-25 11:42 PM


Shivering and quivering here
tormented and tortured here
hiding and abiding in here
loveless and lonely in here
quiet and distraught here
mindless and empty in here
wandering helplessly here
in the corners of my mind.


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1 posted 2000-07-26 01:22 AM


This should belong in the dark passions forum. Great use of words and it is scary that one feels this way from time to time. Good job.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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