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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-25 03:49 PM


           (I can't believe it's 500!)

           How do I say I'm sorry...
      for all the stupid things I've done?
           How do I make you realize
            that you're the only
                    one?
        When I look at you, I see the pain
                I've made you
                   bear..
      I never knew it then, but now I know
               how much you care....


        How could I have been so blind
          that I didn't want to see..
        A heart so trusting and so kind
          and you gave it all to me..
        Your soft blue eyes are filled
                   with love,
          There's nothing hidden there..
        You wrapped your love around me
          You kept me warm and free
                   from care....


           I guess they're right...
      there's none so blind as those who
                will not see..
      And when I thought I was all alone..
         You were standing next to me...
      It must have been real hard to love
             enough to let me go,,
      After all these years and a million
                    tears..
         I just wanted you to know.........


            You will always be my joy,
           You're an angel in disguise..
          You've been there, through thick
                   and thin..
          Through black and stormy skies..
        But now the sun is shining bright,
           and the road is clear ahead..
               I will be your love
                     tonight,
          The rest is better left unsaid!

            


Love received is equal to love given!


© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-07-25 05:07 PM


a very good expression to your lover.when something is not obvious it'll require silent understanding and understanding can be there only if there's clarity and clarity can be there only if there is clear and effective communication between two hearts..

Sincerely
A_L

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-25 05:14 PM


A_L.....

       Yes, you're very right..communication
       can make or break any relationship...
       Thank you so much for reading this!


Love received is equal to love given!


Gossamerwings
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207

3 posted 2000-07-25 05:25 PM


If your poems are a song of your life
You are up and down the scale
I wish for you peace and contentment
That leaky boat you no longer have to bail.
Excuse me for trying to rhyme
Its all that I can say
I have been up all night
and this has been a bad day.
*bad rhyme too*  

Hang in there, girl!
Great poem!


Gossamerwings ;)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2000-07-25 05:35 PM


Hi Sunny,
This is great. You write poems one after the other and they are all great. Geez, maybe someday I will also. Hope that I haven't missed any of yours, as I enjoy your thoughts as you put it into verse.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-07-25 11:54 PM


Gossamerwings....
               Oh, I liked your verse!!
         Thank you so much for liking mine...

Hi Bill....
            Thank you so much for your reply,
         and I'm glad I can touch you with
         my words..........I think your work
         is fantastic, my friend...and I read
         all that I can find!!! Keep it up,
         as we feed each other!!


Love received is equal to love given!


Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
6 posted 2000-07-26 01:16 AM


Sunny1...congrats on the 500...and such a sad wonderful work to celebrate it with.

never say never

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2000-07-26 11:07 AM


Paula....
        Thank you, and I see that you picked
  up on the 'bittersweet' feeling here!


Love received is equal to love given!


Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-07-26 11:09 AM


           I guess they're right...
      there's none so blind as those who
                will not see..
      And when I thought I was all alone..
         You were standing next to me...
      It must have been real hard to love
             enough to let me go,,
      After all these years and a million
                    tears..
         I just wanted you to know.........


            
Very powerful and intense words.  Lovely read.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
9 posted 2000-07-26 12:12 PM


Mark.....
         This whole thing just kind of fell
      onto the paper! I guess I've got a
      'spur of the moment' type of muse!!
          Glad you liked it!!!


Love received is equal to love given!


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2004-05-23 09:48 PM


very heartfelt
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