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T McCoy
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0 posted 2000-07-25 02:43 PM





          SHE'S BEEN GONE 3 MONTHS
          AND I AM 5 YEARS OLDER
          I MIGHT GO INSANE


[This message has been edited by T McCoy (edited 07-27-2000).]

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Corinne
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1 posted 2000-07-25 02:52 PM


Unusual haiku in that the traditional form uses seasons and nature along with an element of surprise.

The surprise is here, if you continue to age at this rate, whoa!

Interesting post.

Corinne

T McCoy
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2 posted 2000-07-25 03:59 PM


guess I'm still learning something new everyday.....thank you much   Tony
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