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the moonlight |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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I looked around the room trying to escape wanting to find a different place a way out anything that would get me away from them. Then I spotted you looking "dapper" as always as my mother said and our eyes met. I gave you a look with hope that you would save me and as always you were my knight-in-shining-armour you sauntered over to the corner of the room where I had been standing, and in one swift second stole me away. we made our way to the balcony getting there took forever but when we finaly did I was so relieved. Better? you asked and I just nodded, gazing at the sky the starts were bright tonight you seemed to sense I wanted to just stare and you as always were ok with that you were always ok with anything and everything I wanted to do. where did I find you? I asked you just smiled at me and replied I found you... I let out a giggle and you placed your arms around me and we gazed up at the stars with the moonlight dancing around us. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
where did I find you? I asked you just smiled at me and replied I found you... I let out a giggle and you placed your arms around me and we gazed up at the stars with the moonlight dancing around us so very sweet, Martini enjoyed... thank you Maureen |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
well thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it... a real conversation that is that happened to me... and he just thinks he found me, we really found each other. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely portrayal of two equally minded romantics meeting and sharing some moonlit moments...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Romantic tenderness is such a joy to read when you put your pen to it. Wonderful read.  |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
thank you both for your replys they are very kind "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martini, A beautiful poem that you have written. On the balconey with someone that you love, h'mmmm, I can only wonder. Glad I stopped by. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
a wonderful love under the moon light. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Bill thanks so much it was wonderful A_L thanks so much |
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