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All I See Is You
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All I See Is You |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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All I See Is You When I look into the sky To see stars shining bright I should see them twinkling But you're all I see tonight And when I look to see the clouds As they go floating by Your face is all I see As I gaze into the sky When I look out on the swells To see the mighty ships I have to catch my breath again Cause I see my name upon your lips And when I close my eyes at night To dream of love so true I know it was there all along Cause all I see is you When I look into the mountain sky To embrace the smoky mist Your face is all I see As I remember our first kiss And when I see a Daffodil I'm truly mezmerized Cause all I see is you Waiting there in disguise No matter where I look No matter what I do The movies of my memories start And all I see is you [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... Jeffery, my friend, you are in love definitely, at least you give that impression here... so romantic and so tender... lovely all the way... regards, sudhir |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sudhir, "in love" is definitely an understatement  Glad you liked it |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
You see her when you look at all these different things. What do you see when you look at her?¿? Perhaps another poem? Well done! I'm jealous! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Jeffrey* Oh my goodness.....this is so tenderly written. Your love floated across the page like angel wings~ Wonderfully romantic writing....your inspiration must be amazing! |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Jeffrey~ My friend, this is incredible! I am so happy for you -- now, run with it dude, while the muse is on the loose!  Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Jeffery.......I thought this was a beautiful read. Such heart devotion well illustrated by the wonders of nature. Take care.....ethome.. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jeffrey what a lucky lucky lady she is to have a man like you, one who sees her in all the beautiful things in life. never say never |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, **SIGH** Beautiful writing my friend. You see so much these days. Truly incredible. I know she has inspired you more than she is aware. I hope she sees the love you hold for her. One of your best, I think. I love the end . . . Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
How absolutely romantic!! Beautiful Piece! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Perfect, sweet read! I am happy for you and your love.  Gossamerwings ;) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I can hear violens playing and smell scents of vanilla candles...so romantic and tender**I am Sighing**! So Beautiful! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"No matter where I look No matter what I do The movies of my memories start And all I see is you" Jeffrey, certainly your heart and head are filled with poetry, to write such tender verse. I enjoyed this too. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Jeff- Oh this one is my favorite one now, which is saying alot when it comes to your work..they are all great pieces. But this one just flows with such romantic and beautiful feelings. AHHHHH, how sweet love can be. Have you considered this for the book? I think you should, it's simply beautiful my friend. love & all, -Holly |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Than you to all of you This one just kinda wrote itself |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,I love evry word of this poem you wrote.!!!!!!!! Keep it up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Any man who looks at a daffodil and sees his love .... is A-Okay in my book ! Wonderful loving thoughts, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jeffrey Beautifully written with soooooo much meaning. Hang on to those beautiful thoughts and dreams. Write more! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks ol Jeff-gator has got it bad and its SSSOOOOOOOOOO goooooooood LOL oh so romantic jeff... your gonna swoon to the moon if ya keep this us great writing my friend... nothing like poetic inspiration huh? later-head-over-heels-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Jeffery -This was just breath Taking... *sighs* Does this person know how lucky they are to have such a romantic person as you. Beautiful is the word that comes to my mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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