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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-07-25 01:25 AM


My day’s were always brighter
Because you were in my life
My load was always lighter
Because you were in my life

You made my life worth living
Giving hopes to dreams yet cast
You smiled when I most needed
Your eyes just made them last

Keep your thoughts within me
Don’t let them fade away
Hope all the things remembered
Can brighten up your day

You’ve given me your meaning
So let me give you mine
If happiness would be brightness
I would be the best sunshine


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-25 01:33 AM


well...should I be first?  lol..you are sunshine sweetie---looking for my ray bans now...this is lovely and shows the generosity of your heart...touching
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
2 posted 2000-07-25 02:01 AM


Awww...that was beautiful! Thanks, I enjoyed it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-07-25 02:09 AM


Wow did that bring up some emotions and old memories. Really lovely and heart felt. Thanks for sharing it.
            Juls

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
4 posted 2000-07-25 09:20 PM


Thank you all so very much
time heals all wounds hopefully

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