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Summer Storm

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Professor Gloom
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of Depression


0 posted 07-24-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Soft the rain plays on the pane,
Light drumming,
Slacking to return again
With background noise that soothes me,
slight beating,
Of a faint heart that proves me
In time with the drizzles fall,
Keep drumming
Against the window you call
To me to be within touch,
Keep beating
Seeing little seeing much,
Stormís running.

Gloom 2000


© Copyright 2000 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England


1 posted 07-24-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Professor Gloom.....
                (That username caught my eye!), and then I really enjoyed reading
          your work......

    Welcome to Passions, and I hope to read
                more from you!!


Love received is equal to love given!

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 07-24-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Thank you for the welcome Sunny1,
Although our names might be conflicting,
let us share in the enjoyment of the words;
all comment and critique welcomed.

Gloom
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Today the rains played on my mind
At first they trickled through the grays
A soothing noise, they carried me
In arms of dreaming through the haze

I saw you coming, gloom and all
You almost reached within my mind,
The beating on the window panes
Made viewing you too hard to find...

And so on went my day of doom
My welcome to you, Professor Gloom
May all your words be filled with gray
And spirit us when passed this way


"A Touch of Gloom" for you, PG
Maureen




Professor Gloom
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4 posted 07-24-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Thank you for the poetic response,
I am touched at the effort taken for me.
You make a new comer welcome


Gloom
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5 posted 07-24-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

and a big Welcome to you...thank you for the lovely entrance..
passing shadows
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I love this!
 
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