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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Honeymoon Lovers My candy girl Is the sweetest taste She's a delicious cake swirl Made of a creamy paste She's a taste of a thrill Can't wait to eat her up Merry her I will In a buttercup Sugar coated gown With a veil of icing Cough-drops fall down As the bubble gum people sing Honeymoon lovers Licking lollipop lips Under the kool-aid covers Moving macaroon hips |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
totally sweet, ha, makes parallel sense. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
insect.... Aaaaaah......this definitely satisfied my sweet tooth!!!!! Great job here...and fun!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"My candy girl",...how very sweet. This is such a happy tune. Full of sugar and love. Awesomeness!!! Have missed your songs. Be well I. *Peace. *This was post 1234...how neat. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a delicious delight! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
redheart angrybraids…Thank you Thank you Sunny1…Thank you I'm glad it was fun! SpitFire…Thank you And a one and a two And a one two three four! SWEET BABY OF MINE TRUST IN ME…… serenity…Thank you A poem you can eat up! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Wonderful metaphor, should fill anybodys sweet tooth. Obviously all the women here will like the taste of it...  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sounds yummy insect!! Nice one!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Thank you All the women in here are very sweet! Lone Wolf…Thank you for your tasty reply __________________________________________________ This poem is too all the sweet women in passions Sweet Returns Sweet as a honeycomb made from bees So sweet beyond my reaches a mouth watering tease My mouth puckers to think of sours They give sweet reply's I taste to make them ours Carmel covered kisses I will swallow And huge hugs of chocolate mountains follow Each one is a sugarcoated donut friend I'll suck up their sweet liquid songs they send Mmmmmmmmmmm! I love them all I crave for their sweetness to call Please send me some cotton-candy poem dishes Your sweet returns are my wishes ____________________________________________________ |
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