And here I thought you were going to show me the way... instead I must continue to wander aimlessly in the land of might have beens. *S* Ah, well... oblivion will have to wait... for torment sure does inspire you to greatness! *G* Loved it, Deer one!
I tried this, too, but I wasn't very successful. I've read quite a few of yours and you are a very good poet. I put this one in my library to read again. Do you have a website with your poetry? I would like to view it, if you do. If you see this comment, could you E-mail me with a link to your website if you have one? Thank you.
*dream on, baby, dream on me*