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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2000-07-24 02:38 PM


In the Light of Love Above


Flowers forever-fragrant bloom
When Heaven’s high gates open
Birds in harmony, whistle their tune
In the light of love above


Hourglass of sand, we need not know
In picturesque soft meadows of green
In crystal waters, an angel’s glow
In the light of love above


Souls of destiny in soft sunset blush
Hearts awaiting wakening
Beat for eternity in a humble hush
In the light of love above



It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-07-24 02:57 PM


This is remarkably beautiful, Marina.  I applaud you.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-24 02:57 PM


oh man this is gorgeous.  you have done well today my poetic friend.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-07-24 02:59 PM


CLAP CLAP CLAP
And it is time for some ovation...

Marina, this is very beautifully written...

regards,
sudhir

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
4 posted 2000-07-24 03:00 PM


Marina~
     Oh, my dear, this is absolutely lovely!  You always paint such beatuiful scenes in my mind that you take my breath away.  And you can make even the sunniest day seem so much brighter!



Love Ya~

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
5 posted 2000-07-24 09:31 PM


serenity, thank you.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

Mark, coming from you that means a great deal....thank you

Sudhir, thank my friend....thank you

Terry, you are a sweetheart!!!!!  Thank you


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Sven
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6 posted 2000-07-25 12:01 PM


Excellent my friend. . .

You have grown much in your short time here. . . this is proof. . .

Wonderful. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-07-25 09:03 AM


"Beat for eternity in a humble hush."
This is really beautiful Marina...
you make heaven seems very desirable...James

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
8 posted 2000-07-25 11:22 AM


Sven, thank you my friend.  I hope my muse will return soon.

James, thank you.  I hope it is all of what I wrote although......I'm quite ready to find out!!  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


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