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Just Look Up
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Just Look Up |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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When you feel as if the world is crashing down around your feet... You want to run, but you can't find the door... Just look up--I'll be the person there with arms outstretched to meet all your wants and needs--my love is evermore... Just look up--into these eyes that see the love that you could give... Just look up--and see the smile you give to me.. Just look up--and see the heart that's yours as long as we both live... Just look up--it's waiting here for you to see.. There are times when everybody needs a hand along the way... from someone who's not afraide to share the pain... Just look up--into the face of one who'd gladly hear you say... that you'd walk with her through sunshine and through rain....... Just look up--there is no point in looking back, so look ahead... Just look up--the sun is high up in the sky... Just look up--You can believe these words my heart has truly said... For my heart has never ever told a lie... Just look up.... You'll never know unless you try............... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
"Just look up--there is no point in looking back, so look ahead" how many never learn that lesson and so miss out on a greater, truer love than they ever had before. The past is for your memeories bright and dark...but the present and future is yours to make it what you will....SO LOOK UP!!!!!!! I love this and the meaning it conveys never say never |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
it was a lovely read. when people lose their direction in life all they need is a loving hand to care and love. sincerely A_L |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, One after another you do. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, as how many never look up. I only wait for your next writing. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula...I knew you'd see the positive meaning in this piece...thank you!! AL......Yes, we all need a helping hand at some point, and it's good to find one there when we do!! Thank you, also! Bill....Thank you so much, and it's on it's way....I always look forward to yours as you know!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jusy Look Up, Sunny how true, what a true insight. What a lovely poem, I've pinned this to my moniter. Love it  |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
I joined two days ago and am yet to stop receiving inspiration and uplifting. This poem is inspired by a knowledge and understanding of the inner feelings of many who are lost and looking for an escape or release. Thanks for the inspiration. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha... Thank you so much!! I'm glad that this gave you a smile! Richard...Thank you also....I was hoping maybe this would help someone who was feeling a little lost. Also, has anyone said: Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting! thanks for reminding |
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Angel_without_wings New Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 6 |
Hi I'm new here I have been having a hard time right now. That poem made me smile through my tears. Thank you so much. Patricia J. |
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