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Just Look Up

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Sunnyone
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since 07-06-2000
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Staffordshire, England


0 posted 07-24-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone


    When you feel as if the world is crashing
             down around your feet...
    You want to run, but you can't find the door...
    Just look up--I'll be the person there with
             arms outstretched to meet
    all your wants and needs--my love is evermore...


    Just look up--into these eyes that see the
             love that you could give...
    Just look up--and see the smile you give to me..
    Just look up--and see the heart that's yours as
             long as we both live...
    Just look up--it's waiting here for you to see..


    There are times when everybody needs a hand
             along the way...
    from someone who's not afraide to share
             the pain...
    Just look up--into the face of one who'd
             gladly hear you say...
    that you'd walk with her through sunshine and
             through rain.......


    Just look up--there is no point in looking
             back, so look ahead...
    Just look up--the sun is high up in the sky...
    Just look up--You can believe these words
             my heart has truly said...
    For my heart has never ever told a lie...
                 Just look up....
    You'll never know unless you try...............


Love received is equal to love given!

© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 06-17-2000
Posts 5525
missouri


1 posted 07-24-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

"Just look up--there is no point in looking back, so look ahead" how many never learn that lesson and so miss out on a greater, truer love than they ever had before. The past is for your memeories bright and dark...but the present and future is yours to make it what you will....SO LOOK UP!!!!!!! I love this and the meaning it conveys

never say never
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


2 posted 07-24-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

it was a lovely read. when people lose their direction in life all they need is a loving hand to care and love.

sincerely
A_L
Bill Charles
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since 07-11-2000
Posts 11011
highways, & byways, for now


3 posted 07-24-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Sunny,
One after another you do. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, as how many never look up. I only wait for your next writing.
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England


4 posted 07-24-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Paula...I knew you'd see the positive meaning
        in this piece...thank you!!

AL......Yes, we all need a helping hand at
        some point, and it's good to find one
        there when we do!! Thank you, also!

Bill....Thank you so much, and it's on it's
        way....I always look forward to yours
        as you know!!!!


Love received is equal to love given!

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 07-10-2000
Posts 7542
Maidstone Kent England


5 posted 07-25-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Jusy Look Up, Sunny how true, what a true insight. What a lovely poem, I've pinned this to my moniter. Love it  
Richard McDonald
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since 07-23-2000
Posts 31
Queensland, Australia


6 posted 07-25-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for Richard McDonald   Email Richard McDonald   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard McDonald

I joined two days ago and am yet to stop receiving inspiration and uplifting. This poem is inspired by a knowledge and understanding of the inner feelings of many who are lost and looking for an escape or release. Thanks for the inspiration.
Sunnyone
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since 07-06-2000
Posts 5483
Staffordshire, England


7 posted 07-25-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Marsha...
         Thank you so much!! I'm glad that
  this gave you a smile!

Richard...Thank you also....I was hoping
  maybe this would help someone who was
  feeling a little lost.
      Also, has anyone said:

         Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!
    


Love received is equal to love given!

passing shadows
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8 posted 04-22-2005 08:12 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very uplifting! thanks for reminding
Angel_without_wings
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9 posted 07-13-2006 12:40 AM       View Profile for Angel_without_wings   Email Angel_without_wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel_without_wings

Hi I'm new here I have been having a hard time right now. That poem made me smile through my tears. Thank you so much.
Patricia J.
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