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A Comforting Star
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A Comforting Star |
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niceguy6459 New Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 4 |
a short time ago on a cloudy night a star shone through the darkness it shone with comforting light this star once cast no shadow its light gave me soo much care it was lonley, the same as I I thought it would always be there a short time came to pass the clouds grew thick dim grew the comforting star I began to feal sick now my coforting star is gone it was not the one my prayer will be answered in morning but when will I see the sun? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
look to the heavens there is always another star if you look hard enough never say never |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions!! Awesome to have you here, and a touching poem to boot. Please check your e-mail for a special welcome...   K |
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