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Sorrow's Droplets(Haiku)
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Sorrow's Droplets(Haiku) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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5-7-5 < !signature-->~*~ Falling through the night Sorrow's droplets softly fly O'er liquid starlight. ~*~ *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfection of imagery! Boy you've got these haikus down pat! Very nice job..  |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
Great job krista! i like your haikus, though i imagine they're hard to write. every word is obviously chosen carefully! like it much!  Erin |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Sorrow's tears cascade Caught by the heart of a friend Tissued with much love *Lovely thoughts you pen, little poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Krista... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful Haiku, dear, creating such a vivid image in a few short syllables is quite a feat! Enjoyed this much! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love your Haikus Krista, this is beautiful! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Krista, this is amazing. It really is quite the feat to write something as imaginative and beautiful as this in only a few syllables. I have always respected your talent and stood in awe of your work. I look forward to more haikus or senryus by you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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