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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-07-24 12:53 PM



Goddess Of The Night

~*Marge Tindal*~

Goddess Of The Night
do your magic on me
Hold me enchanted in ecstasy
Until curtains of the day
open up on sunbeams dancing
Hold me close in slumber
of poetic romancing

O' Goddess Of The Night
scribe beauty with magic quill
Upon the pages of a heart
dipped from a friend's inkwell

Thoughts of my making
in magic of night
Upon my awakening
present charms of delight

Flow from my heart
finding a friend
For there lies the beauty
of my pen

Goddess Of The Night
with this heart-felt render
Etch the hearts
of friends so tender





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-07-24 12:57 PM


Marge again the beauty of your words brings a smile to my face and a song to my heart

never say never

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2 posted 2000-07-24 01:13 AM


Yes you are...congratulations on your 8,000th post!!      
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3 posted 2000-07-24 02:42 AM


Paula~
Thank you for the response.
I like the idea of spreading smiles.

PoetdeVine~
Thanks for the congrats !
Time flies when you're having fun !
And I'm definitely having fun ! !

I appreciate the compliment.
I hope this came off as appreciating
the 'Goddess' of my muse who works her
magic on my thoughts in the night.

Without the ink from others,
I have no Houdini to perform !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2000-07-24 02:45 AM


YOU RANG?

Lol...but you knew that I would be here...thank you much, Marge!!!  you are my late night poetess...always leaving me smiling...thanks.

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5 posted 2000-07-24 03:36 AM


Serenity~
LOL !  
You answered !  
Yep, probably did guess our muses
were flirting around in these passionate halls !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2000-07-24 08:14 AM


Marge, they say that people who talk to themselves are a little, er, off so you better stop!


No....don't  

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7 posted 2000-07-24 09:52 PM


Oh Marge!  I love poems about the night time.  Thank you so much for your emails.  It was so sweet that you noticed I hadn't been in here for a few days.  I went on a little vacation for a week.  And to be perfectly honest my muse has been on vacation longer than that.  Having a bit of a dry spell I am.  But anyway, this is a beautiful piece.  I absolutely love it!!!    
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8 posted 2000-07-24 10:28 PM





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*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*




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9 posted 2000-07-24 10:29 PM


Marge--If you are up all night writing beautiful poetry...when do you get to sleep per-chance to dream?  I do love you!
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2000-07-24 10:42 PM


Marge~

Your pen etched my heart
True from the very start
With your heartfelt poetry
That each day I come to see

Inspiration from friends
Takes you to new ends
How far will it go?
Only you and your heart know

The Goddess of the Night
Has shown on me her light
To light the darkened way
Taking me to a better day

Thank you from my pen
A million times ten
See that there star?
I am where you are!

**Still smiling**
Love Ya,
Lone Wolf




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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11 posted 2000-07-24 10:47 PM


oh thank you for taking me there sweet one,
i loved the last piece,
simple lovely.


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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12 posted 2000-07-24 11:11 PM


Balladeer~
YOU talking to ME ?
You are my favorite flavor of silly !  

TennesseeAngel~
Welcome back !
Glad you got a chance to have some fun !
Nothing like reading poetry to
stir that little muse into action !

Rindercella~
Nice smile !
Back at'cha !

Martie~
Shucks-
When the muses come ...
SOMEBODY has to make the coffee ! !
You're such a dear !
Doesn't EVERYONE sleep sitting up at
the keyboard writing poetry ??
Love you, sis~

LoneWolf~
Now you got tears in my coffee.
But, I'm smiling at the same time !
Thank you so much for the lovely verses ...
means the world to me.

RedHeartAngryBraids~
So pleased to see your reply, little one.
Glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-07-24 11:43 PM


Ah Marge....Our Goddess of the Night.... such beauty in the wee hours.... Simply awesome!  Bonnie
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14 posted 2000-07-25 12:50 PM


Bonnie~
Hello, friend !
Well, the midnight muses are the
real Goddess's of the night ...
but thanks for the compliment.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Mark Bohannan
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15 posted 2000-07-25 12:59 PM


So do we bow and kiss your ring or your ink pen?  I think I would love to have a dip of my pen into that inkwell of yours.  Great write and who cares if you talk to yourself.
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16 posted 2000-07-25 01:16 AM


Well, Mr. MarkB~
You can just kiss my royal ...
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Gotcha'




Hey
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talking
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YOU !


LOL !
Thanks for the fun !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


TerryW
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17 posted 2000-07-25 10:38 AM


Marge~
     Well, my dear, your words were etched into my heart, at least!  I am so glad that I took the time to go back a few pages -- I couldn't have stood it if I had missed this one!

{{Hugs}}
Love Ya, my friend!


~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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18 posted 2000-07-25 12:32 PM


Marge, you are always so much fun. I agree with Bal, talking to yourself will get you talked about. But thats a good thing here.

Parker

tracie66
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19 posted 2000-07-25 08:15 PM


WOW I hope she works her magic on me as well...great imagery Marge   a wonderful piece of work
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


ethome
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20 posted 2000-07-25 08:25 PM


You etched some tender on my heart with this one Marge. I don't know how I missed it before but I'm glad it came back up here so I could enjoy it.
We're going to have to start calling you Goddess of the pen pretty soon.

take care.......ethome.....

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21 posted 2000-07-25 09:39 PM


Beautiful rendering, Marge!  

Denise

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22 posted 2000-07-26 07:14 AM


TerryW~
Your friendship is a treasure to me.
Always my deep appreciation.

Parker~
Tee-Hee !
If they're talking about me -
they're leaving somebody else alone.

Tracie~
Thank you for your sweet comments always.

ETHome~
The Goddess of my pen is driven by
the thoughts that others place in my heart.

*Thank you all for your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Sudhir Iyer
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23 posted 2000-07-26 07:33 AM


Oh Marge,
How did I miss this?

Such a delightful poem...

regards,
sudhir

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24 posted 2000-07-26 07:05 PM


ooohhh Marge,
this invokes an "Elizabethian" flavor for me!
all lace and swirls and such...

great imagry!


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


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25 posted 2000-07-26 07:17 PM


Sudhir~
Sweetie, you found it ..
that's all that matters.  
Thank you.

Daniel~
Thank you for seeing the 'flavor'
of it ... that's just how it came
to me ... lacey and swirling !
I appreciate your sweet comment.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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