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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-07-23 11:50 PM



     Come here, Baby, put your arms around me..
     Don't let go until we reach.....
             A brand new morning.............
     I just want to feel you next to me
     And know our hearts will beat in harmony...
                 For all time....


     All day long I dreamed of holding you..
     Somehow you took control of all my thoughts..
             Without a warning...
     So, lay right down and let me hold you close
     I'm going to rock you gently 'til
             tomorrow's sun begins to shine...


    I got you....So I'll keep right on believin'..
    I got you....When I really need a friend..
    I got you....You're my living proof that
             fate still smiles on dreamers..
    I got you....And I am yours until...
                     The
                     End...


Love received is equal to love given!


© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
1 posted 2000-07-23 11:55 PM


You got me with this one.........  

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
2 posted 2000-07-24 12:01 PM


Sunny, that was wonderful! So beautiful!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2000-07-24 08:02 AM


Geez Sunni,
This is a very nice one, makes me think. I am always looking forward to these special poems that you do so well. And your photo is very, very, very, nice.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-07-24 08:27 AM


ok so you got me...now what you gonna do with me????LOL  I couldn't resist the little tease.  wonderful write.  Keep sharing.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-07-24 09:48 AM


Michael......Thank you! and glad you like...

Sauni........Thank you for reading this...
             I appreciate yours, too....


Love received is equal to love given!


Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-07-24 09:52 AM


Lovely Sunny!  This reads as if a melody should be placed to it ... very beautiful thoughts!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2000-07-24 09:54 AM


Bill....I always enjoy your replies, and I'm
        glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank
        you for commenting on the photo...I
        had to take a crash course in
        graphics to do that one!!


Love received is equal to love given!


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
8 posted 2000-07-24 09:59 AM


Mark....You're such a tease, but that's ok!!
        I'm glad you liked this one!!

Kit.....Thank you so much! and you're right,
        it does have a melody. I write most
        of my poems while sitting at my
        keyboard. Wish I could play it for
        you.....


Love received is equal to love given!


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
9 posted 2000-07-24 12:00 PM


Sunny1 what better songs than the ones from your heart...great work here girlfriend

never say never

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
10 posted 2000-07-24 08:51 PM


Paula....
          I really agree with you on this!!
       From experience, I've seen that the
       songs that people like the most are
       the ones that they feel, with all
       the different emotions.
         And...thanks for reading & liking!!


Love received is equal to love given!


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