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LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma

0 posted 2000-07-23 09:17 PM


My Angel

An angel came to me one night,
And told me everything's allright.
And told me not to be afraid,
For she is watching me every day.

She says she hears my prayers at night,
And when I cry, I blur her sight.
She said that she's a part of me,
A part, again, I'll never see.

She said she wanted to let me know,
She'll always protect me-though she may not show.
She'll guide me through the times I cry,
And help me figure out, when I wonder why.

And with that she lifted up her wings,
Closed her eyes and began to sing.
And with that, she disappeared,
Never again to re-appear.

But now I see, and now I know,
She'll always be with me where ever I go.
Now I can look in the mirror and say,
"I'm glad to face another day."

~*~LiLOnE~*~




[This message has been edited by LiLOnE (edited 07-23-2000).]

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Richard McDonald
Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-23 09:23 PM


Personally I have a love of angels and am always interested to hear what others ideas are of them. You have expressed your ideas beutifully through poetry. Thank-You
LiLOnE
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
2 posted 2000-07-23 09:28 PM


Richard--
Thank you for replying to my poem! I love Angels too..
Welcome to Passions! You will love it and make lots of friends here!!!
~*~LiLOnE~*~

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-07-23 11:24 PM


Sweet and tender writing Lil, I enjoyed it~
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2000-07-24 07:12 AM


This is perhaps the best of your work that I've seen yet, Amy... I really like it..


LiLOnE
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
5 posted 2000-07-24 07:46 AM


BDC* Thank you so much.. I am glad you enjoyed it ! : )

Nan* Thank you so much! And thank you for the Angel! It is adorable!!!!    

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