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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-23 08:59 PM


Somedays you guys make me feel unwanted
Mom I know you want to go back to Finland
Thats your dream so you can go

Miia,Jeff,Maiju,Bret,Suvi I don't know what you guys want to do,
But please start understanding me

Jeff you'll never understand me when you yelled at me,
I felt like you did want me in your life,
So next time think of your words.

You'll never understand me cause your always joking around,
Where's the face that I first saw you?
I know deep inside of you theres a serious Jeff

Not this joking around Jeff but this Jeff who wants
To learn more about his sister- in - law
But you gotta do it fast before our lives end

Maiju and Suvi you guys gotta laugh more so doesn't Miia and Bret,
I really don't care what you guys think about my poem



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lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
1 posted 2000-07-23 09:44 PM


Ah lassie,

I would go there in an instant too... Your heart is sweet and words as tinder silk. I am of the Welch and still though my loved ones are here my heart longs for there.

Dale


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