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Unfolding
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Unfolding |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Unfolding ... For tonight, the raindrops echo in the emptiness. The tears of ink stain the pages of my night. Brushing my lips with my fingertips I remember, for the moment only, the feel of your skin as it touched mine. Though hearts apart, your melody plays in my silence. I hear your words on my lips, as they rise from within and I find myself repeating them, as if hearing them for the first time. It's the little things you do that define what you mean to me. The way you brush my bangs out of my eyes, when facing me. How you don't mind the tears that flow, when I can't hold them back and they fall upon your shoulder. There is that special way you make me giggle and laugh as you trail your kisses from my lips to my neck, and down my body. And the lifting of me over your shoulder, as you carried me off. Even your stubbornness secures me to you, knowing that we are open to one another, and as time passes, we continue unfolding the pages of our dreams. M 7*19*2k |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The visuals here are amazing---and your style is so sweet and gentle I can hear you reading this...my lips moved as I read it thrice...nice...more than nice... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tender, gentle and beautiful Maureen. Excellent! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
serenity...such a sweet thing to say..thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ethome ...thank you for the soft words, E. ~~smiling Maureen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, such lovely love has drained on this page of passion....  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Just lovely to read and remember ....... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Martie, thank you for the thoughts, yes some things in life effect me with deep passion to be expressed in words only ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge..thank you..these feelings are too wonderful to ever forget ~~softly Maureen |
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