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ME
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since 2000-07-22
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0 posted 2000-07-23 06:53 PM


I've been looking for you,
in the sky
in the mountains
even in the sea

where are you?, I ask myself
I just looked next to me
and you there
inside of me, outside of me
in my heart, in my dreams
in my reality, in my sleep

I love you and I need you
I don't know how to live without you



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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
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1 posted 2000-07-23 07:00 PM


ME,
In just those few words I could sense how you feel. Emotions have spoken in this write of yours. Very nice.

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