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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Beauty--beating, on this day, caressed by breeze of all belonging, pulse of love to dance my soul-- senses sing in day of songing. There was no pain in break of dawn. No remorse felt, being here... tenderness in bird of song, strength, that grows by seed of fear. Eternity, she softly speaks, the tongue of leaves of swaying tree. And how my self surprises me! So sweet to know her as my friend... And would you join me on this day, no rhyme of words be left to say, no heart of pain to pray away, I'd simply write, "the end." |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked the first verse. Elizabeth God made a little gentian It tried to be a rose It failed, and all the summer laughed But just before the snows There came a purple creature That |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Elizabeth, I thank you for you comment, and if you could, would you please e me, regarding the rest? always interested to know...I would appreciate it greatly. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity~ Beautiful writings...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eternity, she softly speaks, the tongue of leaves of swaying tree. And how my self surprises me! So sweet to know her as my friend... And would you join me on this day, no rhyme of words be left to say, no heart of pain to pray away, I'd simply write, "the end." =================== ~serenity~ be thy name ... ahhhhh you will already know i both love and feel this "breath of peace in knowing"... simply perfect me twin... ( so how did ya get to be so wise anyway)  *blowing kisses to the south* thank you for ALL the ~serenity~ on this day me loves ya me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll just simply say. . . beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Softly touching friendship's wonder ... leaves no questioning to be done. I like it when you breathe the soft thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That was for you, Janet Marie... But YOU KNEW that... thank you so much, for your kindness and generosity...you are a very special lady...a rare butterfly... and by the way...someone once asked me how I got to be so smart...my answer? I f***ed up alot...lol... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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