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She has sleeping pill eyes
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She has sleeping pill eyes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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All this pillow talk has me circling the beaten sky, trekking into early eternity, blissful rumbling stirring to brilliant bleached morning. I am swimming in the blankets dragged back to my coma, weakly I kick myself to wake. In that slight moment between sleep and day I remember her face A haunting icon of deepest daze, she was born in my darkness, a fair nocturnal Princess of beauty undeniable, Opiate whispers caress in divinity I was locked upon her infinite gaze, calling me to abandon the world of stone for the kingdom of dreams. In a flash of eyelids a stirring of clarity she was lost to oblivion and I to the waking dawn. Oh how I desire her addiction her coma affection….. Her sleeping pill eyes "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
If no one has told you this, Brian, you are one fine poet!!! Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Brian that's a great title. I don't know how you and the nocturnal princess got on but I have reason to believe that she was the only one who got any sleep. But hell..you may not have slept very well in the world of stone either. Excellent work! Very very well put together. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
oh my ...another wonderful poem ....in all ways, Brian ~~smiles Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ What intrigue you've captured. 'In a flash of eyelids a stirring of clarity she was lost to oblivion and I to the waking dawn.' Wonderfully portrayed - the dream that got away ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh to love and share our pillow talk till the sun comes up....what beauty is beheld within this kind of love, this kind of lifetime moment.... calling me to abandon the world of stone for the kingdom of dreams. In a flash of eyelids a stirring of clarity she was lost to oblivion and I to the waking dawn. Oh how I desire her addiction her coma affection….. Her sleeping pill eyes |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"Opiate whispers caress in divinity i was locked upon her infinite gaze" "oh how i desire her addiction her coma affection... her sleeping pill eyes" how often i have felt drugged by a combination of restless sleep and beautifully haunting images born of my dreams...you are gifted,and i enjoyed reading every word. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Splendid Work, what lovely imagery... you do wonderfully well with the visuals... Brian, I enjoyed this one a great deal... regards, sudhir |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Brian, one of your best yet!!!!!!! Fantastic writing. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You work surprises me every time I read. I am not surprised at its excellence, but that I take something different away from it each time...incredible, the way you do that. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
THanks you everyone for their wonderful responses and very kind and generous support. Thank you all.  "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda reminds me of me |
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