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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 07-23-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

            Condensed

Paintings of singular call.
Harangue, hang and brood my wall.
Points of paint induced to meld
Produced while my breath was held.

Brought to a myopic bed.
Mental gold turned pigment lead.
Colors brought to fires bright
Dimensions of hyper sight..

Imprisoned phantoms caught in draw.
Brushed and fixed in pigment store.
Caught and held in final goal
Gems implanted by my soul.

To me they are my total cry
Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky.
Reinforced in poets rhyme.
Memories of my loves and time.

Begging to tell, each soul of call
By ghosts that hang upon the wall.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 07-23-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Seymour....
           I enjoyed reading the whole piece,
  but it was the last line that I can't get
  out of my head.....

     "...ghosts that hang upon the wall...."

       What a picture you paint, and paint
                it beautifully.....


Love received is equal to love given!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 07-23-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunny1,
Thank you for the beautiful comment.
redheart angrybraids
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3 posted 07-23-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for redheart angrybraids   Email redheart angrybraids   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redheart angrybraids

i really liked the words and how they all flowed together, very nice,

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 07-23-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Redheart,
I thank you much for the read and kind comment.
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5 posted 07-23-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
Touched with artist's words ...
you bring the pictures to life.

Has to be a joy to see your art
spring to life ...
ghosts of the past ...
telling yesterday's stories.

Intriguing, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 07-23-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

...and excellent pieces they are that hang on your wall, created by your hand, friend Sy.


Gee, I thought this poem was gonna be about milk!  
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 07-24-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
It is , about the milk of human weakness.
Corinne
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8 posted 07-24-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Excellent piece, you should submit it here for the book and elsewhere as well.

Corinne
Paula Finn
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I love this and the image it brought to mine of dusty halls lined with faces from the past

never say never
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 07-24-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Corinne,
I did thank you.

Paula,
Enjoyed your comment.
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11 posted 07-24-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Mental gold turned pigment lead.

Your art says exactly how I feel sometimes about my poetry.

But then all of you raise me up on angels wings.

Have I told you yet today, how wonderfully you write?


Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-24-2000).]
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 07-24-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
No But I will say how wonderful you are. Thanks and *L*
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classic
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Sy the Dauber

 
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