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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
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Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-23 11:12 AM


Cancer can't kill dreams, hopes, love,
Cancer kills itself

It's not easy watching some one who you love
Slowly fade away they get so weak

You have to let them go some time so they can be happy
You may not always want them to go but then their happy

One day a little girl told me

Cancer cannot kill your soul you keep it going

Sometimes I wonder is there ever going to be a cure for cancer,
It's not fair some live a year a week ect..

It's not easy saying good bye to your own father
But all I know is he's watching me.

Remember Cancer cannot kill dreams, hopes, love
         Peace ((fAirY pRiNcEsS))


*If I could walk that'd be awesome, but this is the way I was meant to be*


© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-07-23 11:23 AM


You are very right, Fairy Princess. I'm so sorry to here about your dad, but he is watching you, like you said.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-07-23 11:30 AM




How sad this is to read, there are a lot of emotions that I am feeling right now.  You wrote this with wisdom and pain, and your powerful line "Remember Cancer cannot kill dreams, hopes, love, peace"  is so true and you have said it well throughout the poem.  And I am very sorry about your dad, no one should have to suffer from cancer, please email me if you need anything

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-07-23 11:32 AM



sorry about the triple posts, my computer had to be re-booted

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-23-2000).]

Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-07-23 11:32 AM





[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-23-2000).]

lucky
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5 posted 2000-07-24 04:07 AM


Dearest,

I don't know what to say... I just got back from 2 heavenly weeks of vacation with my imediate family... Checking the phone messages, my wife came to me and said "I have something to tell you honey" your dad called while we were gone and your little brother Gergory is dead. So many questions... First my mother now a little brother... who's next..?

Thank you, Dale



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-24-2000).]

Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
6 posted 2000-07-24 02:26 PM


Your so right.  Disease can only affect our bodies.  but our dreams, thoughts, emotions, and everything that is within our souls is guarded from it and they are eternal.  Nice to see you here away from teen#3.  I'm just checking it out.  Talk to you later.

Jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

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