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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Let me ease the aching tensions of the day... Let me listen to each single word you say... Let me touch your wearied body Take away your every fear... Let me hold you gentle in my arms... Just let me hold you near....... ---------------------------------------------------- Let me be here for you in the night... Let me hold you in the candle light... Let me look into your eyes... See my reflection there... Let me rock you gentle in my arms... Just let me hold you near....... ---------------------------------------------------- Let me do the things I love to do... Let me give your heart a smile or two... Let me take you into me... So you can see how love can be... Let me hold you gentle in my arms... Just let me... Please... let me... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Alright !  I enjoyed it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, What can I say about this writing you have done? Touching? Soft? Tender? Loving? Caring? Wanting? Needing? All of these I felt reading this work. You certainly know how to write from the heart. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge.....Thank you very much!! I appreciate your support, too... Bill...Thank you, and this one did come from the heart.... Love received is equal to love given! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
If I let you ... there'd be a rolling pin with my name on it lovely poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, OK I'm willing. Beautifully done. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Rex....oooh, that sounds painful, and I don't want my friends to be in pain here!!! I'm glad you liked this!!! Seymour T....Thank you and I'm happy you read this.....you do such beautiful work yourself!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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