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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Shield of Flowers Rising each morning to the light leaking through the slatted shades, I watch the flecks of energy dance before my eyes and wonder... If I sent you an anonymous message would you know it was from me? Would it's perfumed scent give me away? Would the tear stained smudges of caring, blend my thoughts until they become yours? Would the reflection of my love display itself to you, behind my shield of flowers? If I release to you my fading thoughts, untouched, could you see they were meant for you... each word a flower, a gift to you until I am shielded no more? ©Maureen/Moonchild 6* 2k |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If I release to you my fading thoughts, untouched, could you see they were meant for you... each word a flower, a gift to you until I am shielded no more? The power encased shall overcome all obstacles given over to passion. Beautiful write...keep em coming |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
If I release to you my fading thoughts, untouched, could you see they were meant for you... each word a flower, a gift to you until I am shielded no more? loved this phrasing ... well done MMoonchild ... well done |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful images, really enjoyed this one. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark...keep 'em coming??...you are very lucky I am pretty much posting my daily new ones...in a years time I wrote over 500 and I am not sure you mean keep 'em coming that much just laughing at your wordings...and enjoying it ~~soft smile M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
MA..thank you for your kind words... Brian, I am glad you enjoyed...as I do all I have read on here (including the many wonderful comments and support of all poets) ~~softly Maureen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's more than one a day Maureen...you're quite the fountain of poetic composition. Beyond that, this is beautiful in the greatest sense of the meaning of that word.. "if I release to you my fading thoughts, untouched, could you see they were mean't for you.. each word a flower, a gift to you until I'm shielded no more?" If that's not one of the finest examples of great poetry then I'll have to eat my computer screen....take care..ethome.. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
laffin' here..I am in the middle of breakfast and am wondering if you would like some butter and syrup to spread on your screen....thank you E. I enjoy your visits ~~softsmiles Maureen actually I write around 3 a day (including poetic responses that I turn into completed poems)...unless I force myself to do other things and even then I am jotting down ideas... |
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