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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
White clouds are lined with gray Blue skies disappear for today Light now turns ever so dark Upon her heart he left his mark This is not the life she dreamed Where nothing was as it seemed Days spent feeling all alone Remembering the love he had shown Soon his presence would be a memory There will be a resolution to their story The ending will be what the heart reveals Doors will open or be forever sealed Time will heal her battered heart Either way she'll get a new start Stormy days filled with thunder Give way to sunshine and wonder Clouds that once poured rain Have washed away the stain Of a love that turned sour Leading to their final hour Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
This is sad,LW.I hope you take that new start and run with it. Each love teaches us something dear to our hearts...something we need! Sorry for your pain...Hang in there!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I feel your pain here LW. Time will dull the pain and give way to new beginings. Take care! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
GossamerWings . . . Thanks for reading. Yes, there are lessons to be learned here. I am hanging!! Eagle One . . . Thank you and yes, time heals all. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ When clouds of the day have parted Night comes rolling in Bringing stars to light up the heart of a friend Know me by the stars that I hang in the sky for you Twinkle - twinkle, little one no more feeling blue Take a look Make a wish There's one waiting to come true Hanging in the nighttime sky Just waiting there for you *A little smile for you Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jenn, so much hope for the future well, you know my motto.... "Tomorrow is a brighter day" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
hope is right around the corner...just keep turning them til it hits you in the face. As always LW such beautiful words never say never |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A sad but well-written poem, this one, Lone Wolf... Take Care, hang on and be there... regards, Sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Time will heal her battered heart Either way she'll get a new start Stormy days filled with thunder Give way to sunshine and wonder Clouds that once poured rain Have washed away the stain Of a love that turned sour Leading to their final hour LW-This is so beautiful. Your reaches are astounding. I just love to find ones such as this before my morning coffee is done. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I am touched by your heartfelt poetic reply my friend. You have brought a tear to my eye with your love. I am going to look up into the sky tonight and make that wish with all my heart. That was just lovely Marge. You have left me here almost speechless. Thank you from my heart.  LW --------------------------------------------- Jeffrey . . . Thank you and I know, my friend. Paula . . . I hope it is gentle!! LOL. Thank you so much. Sudhir . . . Thank you and I will hang on for as long as it takes. Mark . . . Happy to brighten your morning. Thank you for the kind words and caring. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Just lovely ~~softly sighing Maureen |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi you! "Either way she'll get a new start",...isn't this what we keep saying? Perfection here. It's so true. I'm here wishing too on that star with you and Marge. Always. Wonderful work here LW. Be well. *Peace. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, nice writing! Enjoy your work! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What to say that hasn't been said. poignant, beautiful, wonderful said and done...and tomorrow is another, brighter day. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Maunreen . . . Thank you. SF . . .Hi you back!! This is what we say all the time . . .so true. Thanks for the reply and the wish. Take care. DH . . . Thank you!! Where ya been?? JWesley . . . Wow, you found a lot to say!! Thank you, and yes it is a brighter day. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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