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Vision of life
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Vision of life |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Hey all, I have been gone for a while, but now I am back, here is one to muse over while I have a look see at what I have missed. Enjoy!! A Vision of Life There she stood, in my mind's eye. Dressed in a robe of pure crystal vision, emitting an array of lites, darting around her in the purest of pure colors. This strong lite is filtering into every dark corner of my sanity. Blinding. She stood so still, waiting... waiting for me. I reach out a hand to touch her face, but instead, it pass right through her beauty. She does not move. Nothing moves. The darting rays are dancing around her, inviting... I can see her breath. The heaving of her chest rapid, like one who has just run a mile. I try again to reach out, to touch her. Nothing. And then... as I was about to let go of this vision so pure and fragile, she moved closer to me. Closer. Closer... untill we become one. Spinning and twirling, up- up into the skies above. Twisting and reeling. No pain. No thoughts. Pure enjoymant. We are one. We always have been. She is me. I am her. The lites... our thoughts. Just out of reach, yet there to touch, but always out of reach. I open my eyes. This vision is gone and left me gasping for air. What? Who? Why? The answers are there. Just out of reach. She is life, I am life. Life is us. Do you understand? Adri |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I do! I thought this was provacatively done. Full of mystique and anticipation for the answers. Great work! glad you're back |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
thank you ethome, this was my 1st work done after a very-very long absence from my pen...lol. Glad yuo like. A. |
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