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On Mornings Return |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
By mornings light I rise ... and I feel you from the depths of my soul. While in that quiet moment, I know I am complete and finally whole. Your still with me every second, everywhere I look ... it's you I see. You are the breath that sustains, you are my poetic light of destiny. My day's new dawn ... my moon's midnight sky. My falling star to wish upon, my angel wings to fly. I see you in the satin clouds, I taste you in the rain. I hear you in the winds of change ... you softly whisper my name. This love remains unfaltering, your in my heart to stay. As you shine on me with the morning sun ... I smile and I know ... heaven's not so far away. Janet Marie for DeVante'... with love, always ~Heart Treasures~ 5-7-5 Echos of lost love whispers of a heart healing cherished memories Fate and Destiny devotion and promise kept stands the test of time jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beautiful, Janet Marie...my turn for worship here...so soft and sweet...a very gentle return of your muse...I thank her... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Glad to see that you muse is behaving, what can I see except the heavens opened and a beam of light shone through. Divine.  why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janet Marie, Ahhhhhh, this is so precious a verse. I see you in the satin clouds, I taste you in the rain. I hear you in the winds of change ... you softly whisper my name. Phew, don't know what else to say. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Janet this is positively beautiful! Your muse is back in full swing I see!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Janet Marie, now look what you are doing...giving me more to strive towards... You knew I'd like this one, didn't you? Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Enjoyed this one greatly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Janet I have to agree with the rest of the comments. This is beautiful! Your muse is roaming round your heart again and it's spilling words of beauty on the page. I can hear them spill....... "My days new dawn my moon's midninght sky my falling star to wish upon my angel wings to fly." spilling spilling from the heart....how nice! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful poem J.M. like a breath of fresh air in my wilderness, loved it your friend Olias |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh My Oh My.......This is absolutely the most beautiful poem!! You have captured such tenderness and love within these lines...you've added your heart, soul and tears...Janet this is perfect!! Where is MY submit button?????? I WANT TO VOTE!!!! do I have to beg??? I make really good Puppy dog eyes Pleeeeeeeese!!Tears maybe???? Take care sweet sister....Big Hugs for this one....and Butterfly Kisses! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet--Just beautiful, tender and touching and....oh you know all the words...I wish there were some new ones for Wow! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful! I taste you in the rain.....wonderful line |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I can only echo all of the above, simply beautiful JM. Bonnie |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh Janet--what can I say that has not been said. *Sighs* This is great. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My day's new dawn ... my moon's midnight sky. My falling star to wish upon, my angel wings to fly. I see you in the satin clouds, I taste you in the rain. I hear you in the winds of change ... you softly whisper my name. This love remains unfaltering, your in my heart to stay. As you shine on me with the morning sun ... I smile and I know ... heaven's not so far away From the purest of love's depths you have written. This is sssssoooooobeautiful. Glad to see your muse didn't take the weekend off. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM, Sigh, this is fabulous writing!!!! So soft and sweet, I feel the tenderness you have written with. You heart is pure gold my friend. Happy to see you muse back from holiday. Looks like the rest did her some good. Great writing!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jan this leaves me breathless!!!!! He must have been a very special person. They say the company you kept, reflects yourself. If this is true you must be wonderful!!!!!!!! I know that I can certainly vouch for your friendship!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thank you all...this one came as a gift... from a dream. When inspired by this extraordinary man... not even my moody can stop the magic. I dont write these poems...he writes them thru me. Something angels and butterflys can do thank you for such wonderful, accepting and all knowinig words. this place is also magic and a gift. love ya all jm  ~Butterflies Are Meant To Be Free~ I love you Vante',always thank you for the poetry you gave back to me. all promises kept ...always Janet Marie There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Kathryn Miller New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 6 |
This poem to me tells of your love in your heart & soul for your soul mate. Thanks for reminding me that no matter what happens my love for my soul mate will always be there. I need to draw strength from it in the bad times and embrace it joyfully in good times. Thank you for sharing something so precious. Kathryn Miller |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Let's all say a great big Welcome Back to Janet's muse. Exqusitely loving poem here!Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, it seems nothing can stop you when DeVante visits your inspiration. This was truelly from the heart. Parker |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
words like those make me long to love like that...only if we all had that sort of inspiration! thank you for showing me a little slice of heaven on earth! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah Janet! What a beauty! Mesmerised by the poem, I am just in solemn quietude... regards, sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful, JM! Corinne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
J.M.* I came back to read this...with the light you shined upon this it's twice as beautiful as it was the first time....the feeling is awesome and brings tears to my eyes...his love lives on in you sweet sister~ **AW Hugs** |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
this is an amazing piece of poetry it is also testimony to your undying love for him and the gifts of your love for each other. He will always live inside of your heart and your poetry. He is smiling as well i type thru tears by this poems gift luv u< !signature--> my sister is the poet I am but a shadow by the light of poetry I read then dream [This message has been edited by shadow of poetry (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
JanetMarie~ Such sweet words, from such a sweet soul! My friend, this is exquisite. I am so glad I got back in time to read this one!!!! Now, just have to catch up on the last 7 days or so...... Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Gosh ... how'd I miss this one first time around!!! Breath-taking Janet Marie ... absolutely beautiful sentiments straight from the heart! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"I see you in the satin clouds, I taste you in the rain. I hear you in the winds of change ... you softly whisper my name." -- Glorious words JM...Soft and beautiful and so loving...you've got phenomenal talent girl. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this so good and pure...wish i was yuh yuh no really great work! "Amadeus Amadeus. Amadeus. Amadeus Amadeus. Amadeus. Am Am Amadeus. Come on and rock me Amadeus!"-Falco "don't even lissen to classical music!"-me |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
JM, guess you have given up on me! Got some time so thought i'd stop in for a visit and found this wonderful piece by your talented pen. Great writing as usual! Here's lookin at you BEG. DH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous |
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