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Splendor In The Grass |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Splendor In The Grass ~*Marge Tindal*~ Return me to the splendor among the grasses green Sweet memories waiting in the land of ever-seem Stroll me across the meadow damp with morning dew Daffodil upon the hill preens in every yellowed-hue Poppies dancing on the breeze blown in gentle sway Soar me now, kite-in-flight string me far away Ease me down in grasses fertile with memoried stain Caress me gently-peppered with softly falling rain Wake me when the quilting hour falls across the sky Walk me through the shadowed-grasses parting on gentle sigh *Dedicated to MarkB~ Hope this is 'next' enough ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"poppies dancing on the breeze blown in gentle sway" this is lovely...and i am partial to poppies! what a beautiful image...thank you for taking me there. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh Marge that is so beautiful and so well done. What a natural poet you are..... "Ease me down in grasses fertile with memoried stain. Caress me gently-peppered with softly falling rain. Wake me when the quilting hour falls across the sky Walk me through the shadowed-grasses parting on gentle sigh." Sheer poetic delight flows in every line. Great stuff!!!!! Take care...........ethome............... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge, I could smell the grass, and feel the wetness of the dew on my feet when I read this. Geez, so exhilerating! Well done Marge. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jeez---does this ever take me back. It has been along time since I have been able to enjoy something such as this. I think I just need to take the time but first someone to share it with.  Great imagery. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoutPrincess~ Oh, I'm so pleased to have 'taken you there.' Thank you for letting me know. ETHome~ Sweetheart, your reply has me soaring ! Someone reel me in ! Thank you, friend. Bill~ Thank you for liking - Now ..... dry those feet ! MarkB~ I thank YOU for inspiring me to reach for the 'next' one ! Hey ... you don't 'take' time - you 'make' time ! Love you all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael Auguste Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 12USA |
Marge, This is very pretty and soothing. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the sharing. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MichaelA~ Welcome to the Passion's In Poetry family. I'm glad you appreciated this piece. I am now on your web pages enjoying very much the art of your poetry. You will be a welcomed addition here for sure. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Darn, Marge, there I was, all set to carry you to that wonderful splendor in the grass (not to mention wowee in the weeds) and then I see it's dedicated to someone else!!  I feel pruned!!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Balla-deere~ You just gotta be around here a little 'mower' !  I like the very idea of 'wowee' in the weeds ! *Kisses* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A wonderful tribute Marge! Very soothing and well written as always You are the sweetest- I'm sure that Mark would agree completely!Love ya, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I can smell the flowers and the grass coming from your words. Aaahhh, what a lovely scent and splendid picture that comes to mind! Thanks Mark for inspiring this piece!!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Wake me when the quilting hour falls across the sky" Marge, I believe this is one of the most engaging lines I have ever the pleasure to read...and what a loverly poem in which to find it! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I do appreciate that Mark inspired me with his comment, "What's next?" in another reply. Glad you found it to your liking. LoneWolf~ I knew you would like it. Thank you for letting me know. Claire~ You have a knack for finding the phrase in my work that also is special to me. I liked it and am glad you noticed it. Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
All right Marge, If your going to write these kinds of things when I'm out of town and gone... Well, I'm just gonna have ta tell you that your going ta have ta copy me all the best around. I was kinda thinking how the grass might of felt being all smooshed and..? Hardy Har_lucky-D Ode By William Wordsworth Be now for ever taken from my sight, Though nothing can bring back the hour Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower; We will grieve not, rather find Strength in what remains behind; In the primal sympathy Which having been must ever be; In the soothing thoughts that spring Out of human suffering; In the faith that looks through death, In years that bring the philosophic mind. Ode. By Wordsworth, William. Sometime between 1801 and 1807. [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Well, I just guess you're going to have to stay in town ! Leave it to you to 'worry' bout the smooshed grass ! LOL ! Welcome back from wherever you were ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Splendid Splendor! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--simply splendid...one of my favorites...and I was taken with the quilting as well...so unique..so perfect. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I so love this place. The friends are just so wonderful. Thank you for being here. Martie~ Thank you, my friend. The 'quilting hour' wraps us in the comfort of love, eh? I would have known you'd like it ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES YES I taste this one Marge...and I fully agree with you...its not TAKING time...its MAKING time...you have to work to make love work...and a more pleasant job you will never find if you devote yourself to the task. never say never |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thank you for the read, dear. It is true that time is to be made for the pleasures in life that we seek to enjoy. Glad to have your comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge- I came back to thank you for the lovely poem and the kindness in your heart. When I read it the first time I was unable to express how much you touched me and I do thank you. Please check your e-mail. Hearty hugs to you my friend. And yes I do need to and did yesterday make time thanks to you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Now THAT'S good news ! See how inspirational a thought can be ! Thank you for the very thoughtful e-mail, my friend. Again, I owe you my gratitude for challenging me without even knowing you had done so ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have a beautiful way |
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