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Through Your Eyes (repost for book)

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


0 posted 07-22-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark Bohannan

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          Through Your Eyes
        
Through your eyes...
I see much
The depth of your soul
The secrets of your heart

Through your eyes...
I feel all
The warmth of your touch
The gentleness of your kiss

Through your eyes...
I have love
Sharing our breath
Merging our hearts

Through your eyes...
I tell all
My life given over
To my trust in you

Through your eyes...
I offer this
The respect as one
The truth in love

Through your eyes...
I give to you
The passage to me
Through my eyes

   Mark Bohannan

Thanks for the confidence in this one everyone and I did as you asked.  It is now up for submission.  I thank you all for your wonderful comments that you always bless me with.





[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-22-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 07-22-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Mark, this is beautiful. I don't see "Submission" on my screen, though. Did you check the submission box?

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


2 posted 07-22-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Claire, I thought I had so please try it now.  I think it took this time..  Thanks for pointing that out.  You are too sweet.
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 07-22-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Ah, there it is now. Thanks Mark.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Janet Marie
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4 posted 07-22-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

your such a good poet...
you submit so well lol
voted with pleasure  
jm
ethome
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5 posted 07-22-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Great work Mark you deserve my vote I must say.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 07-22-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Of course something so beautiful should be
included in this book, thank you for giving
us the chance to vote  
Holly
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7 posted 07-22-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Mark-
*click*...you just recieved my vote! NICE WORK HERE! I like your poetry...please keep posting.
love & all,
-Holly
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


8 posted 07-22-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

JM-psst....Don't let it out that you know.  I wouldn't want to be on hands and knees all day.  A couple of hours on the other hand...LOL LOL..   Thank you for the push.

ethome-A big thank you for your kindness.

Bdc- It is I who thank you.  Between you and Jm and the others how could I not.  Your words and sincerity mean the world to me.  
Sunshine
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9 posted 07-22-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah, there is the submission.  Click.
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10 posted 07-22-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MarkB~

Through your eyes
caught in surprise
a glance into your heart.

Wonderful !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


11 posted 07-22-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Holly- you snuck in on me.  Thank you so much for the vote and the read.

Sunshine- thank you so much.

Marge-Ain't the eyes great worlds of their own!!!

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-22-2000).]
Bill Charles
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12 posted 07-22-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Mark,
What a beautifully written poem. The depth of meanings are so real. Good luck on the submission.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


13 posted 07-22-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Bill-thank you so much.  As for the good luck on the book, I was talked into it. I personally think that there are many others more worthy of the chance.  But, who am I to argue.  It is a joy to me to find that people like my poems so much and it would be a thrill to be in the book but the most important is that my poems can be enjoyed as much as I enjoy everyone elses.
Paula Finn
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14 posted 07-23-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

How I let this slip past I dont know but I am glad for the chance to cast my vote and send this back to the top again.. great work my friend

never say never

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-23-2000).]
Marina
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15 posted 07-23-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

i really like this one Mark.  It is a perfect choice for the book.

Marina


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Marina Crossley

Martie
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16 posted 07-23-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautiful again...and a vote!
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


17 posted 07-23-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Paula-thank you so much. They do fly by fast some times and we have to search to catch up.  

Marina-your are too kind.  thank you.

Martie-thank you as always to your constant support and kindness.
tracie66
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18 posted 07-23-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh Mark so glad you listened..this is just incredibly beautiful and deserves to be in the book...great work here  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


19 posted 07-24-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Tracie-I do listen and I thank you so much for your continued kindness.  
Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 07-24-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

yeah Mark,
it is my pleasure to *vote* right away...

regards,
sudhir
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


21 posted 07-24-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Sudhir-thank you much.
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