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Paths of Everchange |
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Peta New Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 5Brisbane, Queensland, Australia |
Timeless reasoning of ebonies light Shine requited with extreme delight Forlorn the moon between the glow Illuminated against the darkened show Farewell the light of daytime glee Enshrouding the earth, Envelopes the sea Abounding vast in midnight’s shower Full of life, returned from power Greydom dew seeps through the leaves Calming voices we cant conceive Return the path of everchange Protect the visions, mute and strange A voyage great across the sky Too many questions to ever know why Rejoice for grace and nature pure That is what love’s chants endure Ambiance primed through nighttime sound Skies reflect dreams that surround Elegance training glimmered styles Thought reaches out across the miles Echoed sentiment flutters back at last revealing the mythical track Ghostly tears for memories thought Peace and harmony forever sought. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Timeless reasoning of ebonies light Shine requited with extreme delight Forlorn the moon between the glow Illuminated against the darkened show Farewell the light of daytime glee Enshrouding the earth, Envelopes the sea Abounding vast in midnight’s shower Full of life, returned from power ==================== Ambiance primed through nighttime sound Skies reflect dreams that surround Elegance training glimmered styles Thought reaches out across the miles Echoed sentiment flutters back at last revealing the mythical track Ghostly tears for memories thought Peace and harmony forever sought. =================== this is stunning and exceptional writing imagery, emotion, wisdom and depth rhyme is perfect Wonderful work here Welcome to Passions Peta, very nice to meet you and to read your words of grace take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Peta, welcome to Passions! I think I'm going to enjoy your works... |
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