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I hear voices.............
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I hear voices............. |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
I hear voices But I don't know where their comming from I know they have to be someones. They apear in my head I don't know who's they are It tells me when I'm doing something wrong I wonder who's they are? I sometimes wonder who's they are I'll never know Someday's I wonder could they be my dad's voices? I'm still wondering who could be in my mind. I cannot tell people what he/she is saying It's hard I can't tell who is saying "HI", If I could I'd tell someone |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FairyPrincess~ You've told me ... and I hear voices too ! What a wonderful spirit you are blessed with. I will enjoy 'listening'.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hello....I enjoyed this piece....I wonder who the voices are too!!! Welcome to Passions!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Fairy Princess, Unanswered questions always make for a good poem. Perhaps some day you'll find the answers. Hope to read more of your work Liz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Fairy Princess I think eveyone hears voices, it's part of our consciousness. We are always talking to ourselves with voices. Our memories are always recalling voices we heard in the past. This is not an alarming thing but part of the gift of life. I like your straight forward down to earth approach to writing. I personally think that will take you a long way.....take care ..ethome. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I do hear a voice too And I wonder could this voice be you You speak so laud and oh so clear Feels as thou were here I liked what I have seen above May your sky be filled with a single silver dove The dove will tell you.....do write on Perhaps those voices one day will sing a song Well done, I liked it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Fairy Princess, I hear your voices loud and clear!! Those voices tell you that you are not alone hon. Very nice writing. Welcome to the Passions family. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi there...I like you simple honest poem and the questions you are asking...I hear many voices too...sometimes I know who's and sometimes not...it's always good to listen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Little fairy princess, we all here voices at some time in our lives and sometimes we know where there coming from and at other times we don't all we can do is listen and learn lovely poem little onelove Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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