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LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
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Sudbury, Ma

0 posted 2000-07-22 11:52 AM


Sunset

Walking on the golden sand,
Looking upon the water,
I see my reflection,
From the sun comming over the water.
The sun's beginning to set,
I sit down upon the sand.
And watch the sun go down,
And set over the distant lands.
I remember childhood memories,
And think of my life now.
Thought of what I would've changed,
And of course I thought of how.
I wondered about God,
And if he's really true.
And if he is, then why he does,
Make things happen the way they do.
The sunset was so beautiful,
It filled me with warmth inside.
Hopefully I'll see one half as beautiful,
Before the day I die.
I walk along the waters edge,
After the sun went down.
For now I have a new memory to think of...
The next time the sun goes down.

~*~LiLOnE~*~

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-07-22 11:54 AM


Oh, I like this one, a LOT!  

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
2 posted 2000-07-22 01:16 PM


Hehehe thank you so much sunny   I am glad you liked it!...  

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