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ME
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since 2000-07-22
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0 posted 2000-07-22 11:44 AM


I wont forget to tell you I love you
I don’t want you to ever feel
Empty from my love
I could never walk from you
And I won’t talk but show
How deep my passion runs
I am the sea to your shore
As you are the whisper in
My lonely nights thirsting for
Your beach to save my sorry
Soul from the storms of my
Tears that fall till we are one



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-22 11:53 AM


Me~
Geezzzzzzzz !
Why does that feel like I'm addressing myself   ? LOL !

Welcome to Passions.
Hope you enjoy your stay among friends.

This is a lovely thought -
'you are the whisper in
My lonely nights'

~*Marge*~



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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-07-22 12:08 PM


ME,
Very many feelings that you have written into this poem. I see that it is your first post, welcome and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-07-22 05:30 PM


Now I get a chance to welcome ME to the forums!! Please check your email for a special welcome.    
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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4 posted 2000-07-22 06:51 PM


Hiya Me, hmmmmmm, I mean hiya you cause I'm me....LOL

I can see some fun and games with your name, .... you obviously have super humour..   

and a great way to start your first post here as well..

HUGS

Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
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5 posted 2000-07-22 07:26 PM


Hey there ...me,
Well, I can also say welcome, yet I am pretty new myself. BUt never mind. I loved this writing of yours, and I fealth every word.
Hope to be seeing more from you..
A.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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6 posted 2000-07-22 08:02 PM


Nice work...me likes?  sigh...welcome to the forum me...this is beautiful...
Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-07-22 08:07 PM


Welcome to Passions
great poem, I really like it!!!

can't wait to read more

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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